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Blood sport activities and there impact on future

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Blood sports has been highly debated topic trending in the recent past. While societies view as old school, harmful and fatal to the animals, I think such activities should be burned. This is because it may lead to extinction of certain species and also against animal rights as stipulated in the constitution. Firstly, blood sports pause a great danger to wildlife as well as domesticated animals. It may be as simple as sociatal bull fighting, dog wars to dangerous hunting people tend to participate in for various reasons. For instance, when I was young we had big cocks and could make them fight newcoming cocks, it would turn bloody and at some occasions, it turned fatal. As play full as we could be, we could not realise the impact on the loss from farmers. In addition, the continuous discussions on animal's rights has opened anew page towards saving life of animals. Being uncivilized activities as recently seen, organizations and government agencies should strive to stop such sports. This is because it can lead to extinction of certain species of wildlife. For instance, white elephant in the horn of Africa extinction was as a result of hunting for tasks. Another example, is bull fighting practiced by Luhya, a community in Western part of Kenya. This may lead to loss of entire animal in the ecosystem. I think it should be stoped and systems strengthened to rescue the helpless animals. In conclusion, blood sports activities especially that leads to loss of life is a crisis in waiting. Modernization is viewing this situation with much more concern. I think it should be summarily burned and the parties involved reprimanded to save animals life and future ecosystem.
Blood
sports
has been
highly
debated topic trending in the recent past. While societies view as
old
school, harmful and fatal to the
animals
, I
think
such activities should
be burned
. This is
because
it may
lead
to extinction of certain species and
also
against
animal
rights as stipulated in the constitution.

Firstly
, blood
sports
pause a great
danger
to wildlife
as well
as domesticated
animals
. It may be as simple as
sociatal
bull fighting, dog wars to
dangerous
hunting
people
tend to participate in for various reasons.
For instance
, when I was young we had
big
cocks and could
make
them fight
newcoming
cocks, it would turn bloody and at
some
occasions, it turned fatal. As play full as we could be, we could not
realise
the impact on the loss from farmers.

In addition
, the continuous discussions on animal's rights has opened anew page towards saving life of
animals
.
Being uncivilized
activities as recently
seen
, organizations and
government
agencies should strive to
stop
such
sports
. This is
because
it can
lead
to extinction of certain species of wildlife.
For instance
, white elephant in the
horn of Africa
extinction was
as a result
of hunting for tasks. Another example, is bull fighting practiced by
Luhya
, a community in Western part of Kenya. This may
lead
to loss of entire
animal
in the ecosystem. I
think
it should be
stoped
and systems strengthened to rescue the helpless animals.

In conclusion
, blood
sports
activities
especially
that leads to loss of life is a crisis in waiting. Modernization is viewing this situation with much more concern. I
think
it should be
summarily
burned and the parties involved reprimanded to save
animals
life and future ecosystem.
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IELTS essay Blood sport activities and there impact on future

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