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Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction.Do you agree or disagree?

Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. GMLYQ

As per the human psychology, money is necessary than everything. There is an argument that huge salary is preceding to job satisfaction. I strongly agree this point as the money is key driver factor the job in the modern world. Firstly, human needs money for meeting his/her family necessity. Due to the inflation rate, the people are struggling to meet their needs as well as their family needs like better education for their children, meeting daily expenses, savings for the retirement, insurance etc. Hence they would prefer more money than the job satisfaction. if they have high salary they are happy and which will definitely leads to the high productivity for the company.

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