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Drug abuse is dangerous to society. Give the problems and suggests some solutions.

Drug abuse is dangerous to society. Give the problems and suggests some solutions. m1XR1
Drug abuse is becoming increasingly dangerous in many nations. Although drugs threaten many societies, its/their effects can also be combated successfully. This essay looks at some of the problems caused by drug use, and suggests solutions to the problem. Drug abuse causes multiple problems. The medical effects are common. For example, addicts abuse their bodies and neglect their health, and so eventually require expensive treatment or hospitalization. In some cases, such as Marilyn Monroe, a drug overdose even leads to death. The second effect is causing crime. People who take drugs become crazy and irrational and often cause harm and danger to themselves and others. However, we can overcome the menace of drugs. Education is the best way to tackle this issue. People need to be aware of the effects so they can avoid the problems caused by drug use. Besides, the government could also use infomercials to educate their citizens. And this is the best approach because they can alert all the citizens about the negative aspects of using drugs. In conclusion, drug abuse is a serious issue because it causes harmful effects on people’s health and people who are high (high people) often commit crimes. The best approaches to deal with it are to educate people about its damaging effects. And the government should ensure all the people are aware of the consequences through public service advertising. Although the problem is unlikely to be eliminated in the short term, there are concrete steps to reduce their effects on society.
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dangerous
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nations. Although
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drugs
threaten
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societies, its/their effects can
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some of the
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problems
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drug
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use
, and suggests solutions to the problem.

Drug
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abuse
causes multiple
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problems
. The medical effects are common.
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, addicts
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abuse
their bodies and neglect their health, and
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so
eventually
require expensive treatment or hospitalization. In
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some
cases, such as Marilyn Monroe, a
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drug
overdose even leads to death. The second
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effect
is causing crime.
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People
who take
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drugs
become crazy and irrational and
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often
cause harm and
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danger
to themselves
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and others
.

However
, we can overcome the menace of
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drugs
. Education is the best way to tackle this issue.
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People
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so
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problems
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use
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because
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aspects of using drugs.

In conclusion
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abuse
is a serious issue
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because
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people’s
health and
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people
who are high (high
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people)
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often
commit crimes. The best approaches to deal with it are to educate
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people
about its damaging effects. And the
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government
should ensure all the
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people
are aware of the
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reduce
their effects on society.
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IELTS essay Drug abuse is dangerous to society. Give the problems and suggests some solutions.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
251 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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