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besides, little do the public know that the celebs’ widespread reputation and enormous fortune stem from their relentless endeavor

besides, little do the public know that the celebs’ widespread reputation and enormous fortune stem from their relentless endeavor wan83

Next/subsequently, Celebs not only work hard/work around the clock but also have exceptional talents, which not everyone is endowed with/ has. Most of the graduated students/graduates finish their course by hard-studying and they get/attain/ achieve/ gain higher degrees like Master or even Doctoral just by studying and trying their best. But to have the title ‘celebrity, you have to be gifted with own special abilities like singing or acting. Extraordinary n bring interesting things to your audiences n watchers. For example/for instance, Anne Hathaway is widely known by virtue of her beauty and outstanding acting skills/ famous for not only her beauty but also her excellent acting ability. She always makes people surprised by taking on many characters with completely different personalities and looks.

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, Celebs not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
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/attain/ achieve/ gain higher degrees like Master or even Doctoral This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
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have to
be gifted
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 special abilities like singing or acting. Extraordinary n bring interesting things to your audiences n watchers. For example
/for instance
, Anne Hathaway is widely
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skills
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famous
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 her beauty This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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 her excellent acting ability. She always This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
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 personalities and looks. 