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besides, little do the public know that the celebs’ widespread reputation and enormous fortune stem from their relentless endeavor

besides, little do the public know that the celebs’ widespread reputation and enormous fortune stem from their relentless endeavor wan83
Next/subsequently, Celebs not only work hard/work around the clock but also have exceptional talents, which not everyone is endowed with/ has. Most of the graduated students/graduates finish their course by hard-studying and they get/attain/ achieve/ gain higher degrees like Master or even Doctoral just by studying and trying their best. But to have the title ‘celebrity, you have to be gifted with own special abilities like singing or acting. Extraordinary n bring interesting things to your audiences n watchers. For example/for instance, Anne Hathaway is widely known by virtue of her beauty and outstanding acting skills/ famous for not only her beauty but also her excellent acting ability. She always makes people surprised by taking on many characters with completely different personalities and looks.
Next
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subsequently
, Celebs not
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work
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hard
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but
also
have exceptional talents, which not everyone
is endowed
with/ has. Most of the graduated students/graduates finish their course by
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hard-studying and
they
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get
/attain/ achieve/ gain higher degrees like Master or even Doctoral
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just
by studying and trying their best.
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But
to have the title ‘celebrity, you
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have to
be gifted
with
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own
special abilities like singing or acting. Extraordinary n bring interesting things to your audiences n watchers.
For example
/
for instance
, Anne Hathaway is
widely
known by virtue of her beauty and outstanding acting
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skills
/
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famous
for not
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only
her beauty
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but
also
her excellent acting ability. She always
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makes
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people
surprised by taking on
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many
characters with completely
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different
personalities and looks.

IELTS essay besides, little do the public know that the celebs’ widespread reputation and enormous fortune stem from their relentless endeavor

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
124 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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