It is true that although the internet has facilitated us in many ways like gifting us a globalisation where this world is now being referred to as a small village but it is also true that it has created many problems too. In this fast paced technologically high world where parents do not have enough time to look at the activities of their small kids because of their busy schedule, small children also have access to the internet easily. They are exposed to many things on the internet which are not suitable for them. They are learning many things which are not good for them to learn at their age.
In addition to this, the internet has also created problems in the financial world also. Nowadays, people are being misguided in a way that many hackers, spammers, and digital fraud make people fool. For example, my friend is being made fool by one of the hackers on the internet. He has asked him to register with a website which can give assistance to go abroad and for registration he has to pay online. He has given his credit card number. His credit card number is being used by the hacker and he made a lot of transactions from his credit card number.
Moreover, In addition to these disadvantages, the internet has also made people far away from each other. In today's world, people are not interacting with each other because they get too busy in their lives. Instead of meeting with each other personally, people prefer to get in touch with each other through internet only.
All in all, we can say that everything has its own pros and cons and it totally depends on the user. Although the internet creates many problems but it has also benefitted us in many ways.
It is true that although the internet has facilitated us in
many
ways like gifting us a
globalisation
where this
world
is
now
being referred
to as a
small
village
but
it is
also
true that it has created
many
problems too.
In this
fast
paced
technologically
high
world
where parents do not have
enough
time to look at the activities of their
small
kids
because
of their busy schedule,
small
children
also
have access to the internet
easily
. They
are exposed
to
many
things on the internet which are not suitable for them. They are learning
many
things which are not
good
for them to learn at their age.
In addition
to this, the internet has
also
created problems in the financial
world
also
. Nowadays,
people
are
being misguided
in a way that
many
hackers, spammers, and digital fraud
make
people
fool.
For example
, my friend is
being made
fool by one of the hackers on the internet. He has asked him to register with a website which can give assistance to go abroad and for registration he
has to
pay online. He has
given
his credit card number. His credit card number is being
used
by the
hacker and
he made
a lot of
transactions from his credit card number.
Moreover
,
In addition
to these disadvantages, the internet has
also
made
people
far away from each
other
. In
today
's
world
,
people
are not interacting with each
other
because
they
get
too busy in their
lives
.
Instead
of meeting with each
other
personally
,
people
prefer to
get
in touch with each
other
through internet
only
.
All in all, we can say that everything has its
own
pros and cons and it
totally
depends on the user. Although the internet creates
many
problems
but
it has
also
benefitted
us in
many
ways.
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