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benefits of volunteer work

benefits of volunteer work G3eYL
Doing volunteer work is the meaningful thing and also have many advantages. Firstly, doing volunteeer work can improve their soft skills. When volunteering for charities you may come out of your shell a lot more and gain a lot of confidence. Secondly, you will have ability to work independently and in team when you in an organisation. Team work is a very important skill to have and it means that you will able to work well in a workplace when you get a job in the future. Thirdly, you can help many disadvantages people like homless, orphan child, people with disability. . . life of disadvantages people can be more improved than they were before. There are make up only a small in many other benefits which you can list and i completely believe that sciety get more and more developed by the volunteer work
Doing volunteer
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work
is the meaningful thing and
also
have
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many
advantages.

Firstly
, doing
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volunteeer
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work
can
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improve
their soft
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skills
. When volunteering for charities you may
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come
out of your shell a lot more and gain
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a lot of
confidence.
Secondly
, you will have ability to
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work
independently
and in team when you in an
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organisation
. Team
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work
is a
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very
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important
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skill
to have and it means that you
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will able
to
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work
well in a workplace when you
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get
a job
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in the future
.
Thirdly
, you can
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help
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many
disadvantages
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people
like
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homless
, orphan child,
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people
with disability.
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.
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life
of disadvantages
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people
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improved
than they were
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before
.

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small
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many
other benefits which you can list and
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i
completely believe that
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sciety
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get
more and more developed by the volunteer
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work
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IELTS essay benefits of volunteer work

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
144 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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