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Benefits of online learning

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Online learning has brought us many benefits. In the context of the current COVID epidemic, online learning is the best way to help students fully absorb knowledge. Firstly, we can stay at home and study, which is a comfortable place for us to gain knowledge. Online learning helps us better grasp the content of lectures. In addition, we don't have to worry about our study time because online learning is very flexible. Teachers also provide us with flexible courses to meet our needs. The last advantage is that we can store learning materials by recording our courses. In addition, teachers often record lessons so that we can review the texts at any time. In the case of the COVID epidemic, online learning methods are useful and bring many benefits.
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flexible. Teachers
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our needs. The last advantage is that we can store
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materials by recording our courses.
In addition
, teachers
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often
record lessons
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that we can review the texts at any time. In the case of the
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IELTS essay Benefits of online learning

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
129 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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