Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

public transportation in the large city

public transportation in the large city V0Eg7
In the last five-decade, transportation options have increased all around the world. It is preferred not only private transportation but also public ones. Especially, public transportation options are metro, bus, tramway, etc. which are so common to get around in the large city. One of the most preferable ones is the metro among the people. I think the most convenient one is it to get around because of its cheap price, time-saving and easiness to reach various locations where people would like to get.
In the last five-decade, transportation options have increased all around the world. It
is preferred
not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
private transportation
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
public
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ones
.
Especially
, public transportation options are metro, bus, tramway, etc. which are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
common to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
around in the large city. One of the most preferable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ones
is the metro among the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
the most convenient one is it to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
around
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of its
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cheap
price, time-saving and easiness to reach various locations where
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay public transportation in the large city

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
84 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • public transportation in the large city