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Being married is one of the greatest experiences in one's life.

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As far as I’m concerned Being married is one of the greatest experiences in one's life 1. I guess I could begin with the first point Share life with others - Marrying someone means that you will be with that person for the next few years for the rest of your life. - Your joy will be doubled and your sadness will be halved when someone shares it. You will no longer feel lonely because at night you have to sleep alone, eat alone. - Your journey will be warm because there are always companions, not alone. 2. Going on to the next point, this is have more support - All the pressures, difficulties, and fatigue of life will be shared and shouldered by a partner. - Therefore, your life will be lighter and more peaceful than those of people who have to strain themselves to do everything that only themselves know. 3. Having a baby - It's the best thing - Taking care of a child from birth to adulthood, you will experience more values of life, know how to love your biological parents more. - These things if you do not get married and have children you will not be able to understand. All things considered Being married is one of the greatest experiences in one's life
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far as I’m concerned
Being married
is one of the greatest experiences in one's
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life 1
. I guess I could
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Marrying someone means that you will be with that person for the
next
few years for the rest of your life.

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Your joy will
be doubled
and your sadness will
be halved
when someone shares it. You will no longer feel lonely
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at night you
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have to
sleep alone, eat alone.

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Your journey will be warm
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because
there are always companions, not alone.

2. Going on to the
next
point, this is
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have
more support

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All the pressures, difficulties, and fatigue of
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life
will
be shared
and shouldered by a partner.

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Therefore
, your
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life
will be lighter and more peaceful than those of
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people
who
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have to
strain themselves to do everything that
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only
themselves know.

3. Having a baby
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It's the best thing

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Taking care of a child from birth to adulthood, you will experience more values of
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life
, know how to
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love
your biological parents more.

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These things if you do not
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get
married and have children you will not be able to understand.

All things considered
Being married
is one of the greatest experiences in one's
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life
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IELTS essay Being married is one of the greatest experiences in one's life.

Essay
  American English
10 paragraphs
218 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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