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Animal activist and welfare groups have always raised their voice against animal testing for drugs and medical research what is your point of view about it

Animal activist and welfare groups have always raised their voice against animal testing for drugs and medical research what is your point of view about it y7JR3
The majority of section of society fight to protect animal as per their opinion it is unethical to make experiment on animals to produce drugs and for medical report I totally agree with this statement as animals are living creatures and they should not be treated as treating material. Number Of arguments support my opinion which will be explicated at length in the upcoming paragraph to come. To commence with animals are considered as the part of this natural wildlife all animals have their own right to live humans are in no place to test on animals to save their own life and future animals are innocent creatures many scientist do test on them without realising that how much pain and even then it may cause to them in addition to this is continuous experiment are made on animals then there will be time come in future when there is no animal and species might extinct which may cause harm to the natural wildlife. Moving further in many countries some of the animals such as elephant and rats are treated as code in people worship animals for 30 people it is unethical to do animal testing and their also feel humiliated for instance in India elements are considered a sign of Lord Ganesha to whom they worship that's why they are against animal experiment and their raise voice against these practices. Furthermore government should also lend a hand to band these type of experiments and instruct the scientist to find other measures to test new medicines and research because those medicines and research are human beings not for animals due to this animal should not be a part of drug testing and scientific research. In conclusion all the it is essential to test new drugs to prevent negative effect that make experiment on animals is not a right choice.
The majority of section of society fight to protect
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animal
as per their opinion it is unethical to
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make
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experiment
on
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animals
to produce drugs and for medical report I
totally
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agree
with this statement as
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animals
are living
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creatures and
they should not
be treated
as treating material. Number Of arguments support my opinion which will
be explicated
at length in the upcoming paragraph to
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come
.

To commence with
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animals
are considered
as the part of this natural wildlife all
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animals
have their
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own
right to
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live
humans are in no place to
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test
on
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animals
to save their
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own
life and future
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animals
are innocent creatures
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many scientist
do
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test
on them without
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realising
that how much pain and even then it may cause to them
in addition
to this is continuous
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experiment
are made
on
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animals
then there will be time
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come
in future when there is no
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animal
and species might extinct which may cause harm to the natural wildlife. Moving
further
in
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many
countries
If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?
some of the
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animals
such as elephant and rats
are treated
as code in
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people
worship
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animals
for 30
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people
it is unethical to do
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animal
testing and their
also
feel humiliated
for instance
in India elements
are considered
a
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sign
of Lord Ganesha to whom they worship that's why they are against
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animal
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experiment
and their raise voice against these practices.

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Furthermore
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government
should
also
lend a hand to band these type of
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experiments
and instruct the scientist to find other measures to
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test
new medicines and research
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because
those medicines and research are human beings not for
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animals
due to this
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animal
should not be a part of drug testing and scientific research.
In conclusion
all
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the it
is essential to
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test
new drugs to
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prevent
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negative
effect that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
experiment
on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
animals
is not a right choice.

IELTS essay Animal activist and welfare groups have always raised their voice against animal testing for drugs and medical research what is your point of view about it

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3 paragraphs
309 words
6.0
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