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Some peopel say radio is best way to get information.while other say television provide knowledge.discuss both view and give ur opinion.

Some peopel say radio is best way to get information. while other say television provide knowledge. d38r7
The importance of radio in human lives was always debatable and has now become more controversial with a few people claiming that the radio is the better way to obtain information while others reckon television is the best way to get information. In my opinion, the given preposition appears to be more rational. However, I will elaborate my viewpoints after discussing both aspects in the forthcoming paragraphs. There are a myriad of reasons why some people agree with the former statement but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that radio is cost effective. To explain it, an individual who belongs to a poor family cannot buy expensive things such as a television, laptop. They can get knowledge from the radio which is beneficial for them. As a result, radio is one of the most effective ways to receive information. On the other hand of this argument due to television they get knowledge. The most pivotal aspect is that television is both audio and visual. Individuals never get bored when they watch television because they can watch the picture with audio. Which are the effective ways. Hence, all the merits stand in a good stead. Following the latter view, television takes initiative to complete this task as it will prove more fruitful to all. One most significant way to get knowledge is television. That's why I am in favour of television. To recapitulate, although both arguments have their own benefits, still television has more advantages than radio.
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in human
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lives
was always debatable and has
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now
become more controversial with a few
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people
claiming that the
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radio
is the better
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way
to obtain information while others reckon
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television
is the best
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way
to
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get
information. In my opinion, the
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preposition appears to be more rational.
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people
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with the former statement
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the most preponderant one stems from the fact that
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radio
is cost
effective. To
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it, an individual who belongs to a poor family cannot
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buy
expensive things such as a
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television
, laptop. They can
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get
knowledge from the
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radio
which is beneficial for them.
As a result
,
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radio
is one of the most effective
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ways
to receive information.
On the other hand
of this argument due to
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television
they
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get
knowledge. The most pivotal aspect is that
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television
is both audio and visual. Individuals never
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get
bored when they
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television
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because
they can
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watch
the picture with audio. Which are the effective
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ways
.
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good
stead. Following the latter view,
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television
takes initiative to complete this task as it will prove more fruitful to all. One most significant
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way
to
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get
knowledge is
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television
. That's why I am in
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favour
of
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television
. To recapitulate, although both arguments have their
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own
benefits,
still
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television
has more advantages than
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radio
.
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IELTS essay Some peopel say radio is best way to get information. while other say television provide knowledge.

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