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Being a celebrity ;Boon or bane

Being a celebrity ;Boon or bane eRD7x
Being a famous celebrity means life is full of glitz and glamour but as a matter of fact being a celebrity is not at all easy but in the same breadth a challenge to always be better otherwise people might forget them going forward. I am going to discuss this in depth. As discussed above as a mattof facter being a famous celebrity does bring fame, stardom and glamour it is not always the same as there is a famous proverb 'All that glitters is not gold'. Being a celebrity means they are always surrounded by the paparazzi and at times they may draw undue attention from different sections of society for not only their physical apperance but their ideology. It is not only limited to their physical apperance and ideologies but their interaction with other co-stars. A lot is also written about their controversies or public spat with other actors as being a celebrity is not that easy and everyday new gossips emerge about their rumored relationships and alleged affairs with co-stars. I would like to support my views by saying there are many celebrities in India who hog the limelight for wrong reasons for example, Alia Bhatt being the daughter of famous producer she thinks very highly of herself and soes not support others while at the same time there are people who have been working endlessley to make a name for themselves At times media treats famous people inappropriately because of their dark past, alleged linkups with other co-stars and it does become a pressing issue because they are not allowed to be on their own. With the advent of social media even a rumoured relationship spreads like a wildfire and it may not be true everytime. Many famous people do go through a prolonged slump in their personal lives which might affect their growing careers. So my only bit of advice to the media would be to treat them on par with normal people as no two people are the same and their privacy should be respected.
Being a
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famous
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celebrity
means life is full of glitz and glamour
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but
as a matter of fact being a
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celebrity
is not at all easy
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but
in the same breadth a challenge to always be better
otherwise
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people
might forget them going forward. I am going to discuss this in depth.

As discussed above as a
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mattof
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facter
being a
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famous
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celebrity
does bring fame, stardom and glamour it is not always the same as there is a
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famous
proverb 'All that glitters is not gold'. Being a
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celebrity
means they are always surrounded by the paparazzi and at times they may draw undue attention from
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different
sections of society for not
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only
their physical
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apperance
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but
their ideology. It is not
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only
limited to their physical
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apperance
and ideologies
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but
their interaction with
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other
co-stars. A lot is
also
written about their controversies or public spat with
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other
actors as being a
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celebrity
is not that easy and everyday new gossips emerge about their rumored relationships and alleged affairs with co-stars.

I would like to support my views by saying there are
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many
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celebrities
in India who hog the limelight for
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wrong
reasons
for example
,
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Alia
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Bhatt
being the daughter of
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famous
producer she
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thinks
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very
highly
of herself and
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soes
not support others while at the same time there are
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people
who have been working
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endlessley
to
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make
a name for themselves

At times media treats
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famous
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people
inappropriately
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because
of their dark past, alleged linkups with
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other
co-stars and it does become a pressing issue
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because
they are not
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allowed
to be on their
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own
. With the advent of social media even a
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rumoured
relationship spreads like a wildfire and it may not be true
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everytime
.
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Many
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famous
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people
do go through a prolonged slump in their personal
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lives
which might affect their growing careers.
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So
my
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only
bit of advice to the media would be to treat them on par with normal
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people
as no two
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people
are the same and their privacy should
be respected
.
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IELTS essay Being a celebrity ;Boon or bane

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
341 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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