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behaviour customer and some thing to buy

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few of the members are borrowing the wings which they do not need and also cannot afford product. that is people can be attracted by the same of the offers and on that item get discount. there are reasons and solutions to this problem the customer are mainly behavior is thinking the product coming of 80% rates of discount. due to people cannot need of thing, but company was trying to attached to product. for instance, in one electronic showroom was used to tie the product of the television and DVD player. so, many of people can think it was comes cheaper

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFew
few
 of the members are borrowing the wings which they do not need and also
 cannot afford You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThat
that
 is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 can be attracted
 by the same of the offers and on that item This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 discount. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThere
there
 are reasons and solutions to this Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphproblem.problem!problem?problem:problem,problem;
problem


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
the
 customer You should probably use "is".is
are
mainly
 behavior is thinking the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
 coming of 80% rates of discount. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterDue
due
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 cannot need of thing, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 was trying to Did you mean "attach"?attach
attached
 to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFor
for
 instance, in one electronic showroom was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to tie the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
 of the television and DVD player. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSo
so
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 cheaper