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behaviour customer and some thing to buy

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few of the members are borrowing the wings which they do not need and also cannot afford product. that is people can be attracted by the same of the offers and on that item get discount. there are reasons and solutions to this problem the customer are mainly behavior is thinking the product coming of 80% rates of discount. due to people cannot need of thing, but company was trying to attached to product. for instance, in one electronic showroom was used to tie the product of the television and DVD player. so, many of people can think it was comes cheaper
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few
of the members are borrowing the wings which they do not need and
also
cannot afford
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product
.
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that
is
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people
can
be attracted
by the same of the offers and on that item
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get
discount.
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there
are reasons and solutions to this
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problem


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the
customer
You should probably use "is".
are
mainly
behavior is thinking the
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product
coming of 80% rates of discount.
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due
to
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people
cannot need of thing,
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but
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company
was trying to
Did you mean "attach"?
attached
to
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product
.
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for
instance, in one electronic showroom was
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used
to tie the
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product
of the television and DVD player.
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so
,
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many
of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
can
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think
it was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
comes
cheaper

IELTS essay behaviour customer and some thing to buy

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
101 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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