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Before an important exam do you think it is better to prepare for a long time or only for a few days Give examples and reasons to support your argument v.1

Before an important exam do you think it is better to prepare for a long time or only for a few days Give examples and reasons to support your argument v. 1
Studying at university or college is the best way to be successful in career is a common belief among some individuals. However, some other people believe that getting a job straight from school is the better option. This essay shall discuss the viewpoints of both the sides and argue that starting career after finishing university or college has more benefits in the long run. Firstly, going to an academic institution makes a person aware of the society, available options, and his/her own strengths. Person get to learn more in the academic environment and becomes the best judge of his/her own path in life. However, it is also a well known fact that it is quite expensive to study in universities these days. One has to have the financial resources to spend to earn the degree of choice. Secondly, a white collar job, with lucrative salary, can only be obtained in case one has a degree from a reputed institute. So, one needs to invest early to reap the benefits of formal education and comfortable life later. Contrarily, some other people argue that getting a job right after the school has its own merits. No initial investment is required for the education and one can start earning bread and butter right away from school. I would argue that it is a short term benefit as one cannot expect an increase in salary without a proper learning in any field. There would be no rise in life or career in this trajectory. For instance, most of the successful politicians and businessmen are well educated. To conclude, I would say that the formal education is very imperative for every individual to succeed. A person cannot go far into a career the short way. So, the best route to true success can only be achieved by university or college.
Studying at
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university
or college is the best way to be successful in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
career
is a common belief among
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
individuals.
However
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
other
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
believe that getting a job straight from school is the better option. This essay shall discuss the viewpoints of both the sides and argue that starting
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
career
after finishing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university
or college has more benefits in the long run.

Firstly
, going to an academic institution
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
a person aware of the society, available options, and his/her
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
strengths. Person
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
to learn more in the academic environment and becomes the best judge of his/her
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
path in life.
However
, it is
also
a well known fact that it is quite expensive to study in
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universities
these days. One
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
has to
have the financial resources to spend to earn the degree of choice.
Secondly
, a white collar job, with lucrative salary, can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
be obtained
in case one has a degree from a reputed institute.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, one needs to invest early to reap the benefits of formal education and comfortable life later.

Contrarily
,
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some
other
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
argue that getting a job right after the school has its
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
merits. No initial investment
is required
for the education and one can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
earning bread and butter right away from school. I would argue that it is a short term benefit as one cannot
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expect
an increase in salary without a proper learning in any field. There would be no rise in life or
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
career
in this trajectory.
For instance
, most of the successful politicians and businessmen are
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
well educated
.

To conclude
, I would say that the formal education is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
imperative for every individual to succeed. A person cannot go far into a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
career
the short way.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, the best route to true success can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
be achieved
by
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university
or college.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay Before an important exam do you think it is better to prepare for a long time or only for a few days Give examples and reasons to support your argument v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
305 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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