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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. NWKX2
These days Time management is one of the most controversial topics between scientists and even common people. Annually many books and articles are published to deal with it, which is a sign of the subject's importance. Some people think that the time management learning process is an intuitive task; eventually, each child will learn how to organize his/her tasks. While I believe the problem is more complicated than it appears. I think time management is a skill and children should learn it in school. I feel this way for some reasons, which I am going to explore in the following essay. To begin with, I guess there is a prevalent miss conception about social and personal skills. Most people do not consider learning these sorts of abilities as a complicated task; however, time management is a tough and scientific task. A person for learning this skill needs a professional advisor, and that that advisor is better to be a teacher in the school. Usually, students are avid to their teachers' advice, and they can learn better from them; therefore, we could conclude that teachers have the most effect on students. For example, some days ago I read an article from a major journal. In the article, the author has argued that students that had learned time management and task organization skills have better performance in comparison to others. The key point in this research was, persons that who had learned such skills from their teacher could better organize their task; as a result, their scores were a little more than persons that had learned mentioned skills from their parents. Second, by learning these skills, students will have a clear view of their interests and their future. When you organize your time you can do a wide variety of tasks; in contrast, youth that do not believe in time management, most of the time are confused and do a small group of activities. In this situation, people that do various works will have a broad experience about tasks and jobs that it gives rise to a better choice for them. Additionally, it has undeniable effects on our minds. When you can organize your assignments and tasks, you can do most of those, in this way, you will be happy about yourself. For example, in university, as I managed my tasks and time, besides the study I was able to go cinema and make fun with my friends. To wrap up, The time management skill is a scientific technique we should help from professionals and teachers that can give advice. By time management we will have a great vision about our interests and future. Therefore, our choices will be rational, Moreover, by doing our obligations we will feel happy.
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learning
process is an intuitive
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and children should learn it in school. I feel this way for
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reasons, which I am going to explore in the following essay.

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with, I guess there is a prevalent miss conception about social and personal
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skills
. Most
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people
do not consider
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learning
these sorts of abilities as a complicated
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task
;
however
,
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time
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management
is a tough and scientific
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task
. A person for
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learning
this
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skill
needs a professional advisor, and that that advisor is
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better
to be a
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teacher
in the school.
Usually
,
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students
are avid to their teachers' advice, and they can learn
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better
from them;
therefore
, we could conclude that
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teachers
have the most effect on
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students
.
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some
days ago I read an article from a major journal. In the article, the author has argued that
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students
that had learned
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time
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management
and
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task
organization
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have
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better
performance
in comparison
to others. The key point in this research was, persons that who had learned such
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skills
from their
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teacher
could
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better
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organize
their
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as a result
, their scores were a
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more than persons that had learned mentioned
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skills
from their parents.

Second, by
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students
will have a
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clear
view of their interests and their future. When you
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organize
your
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time
you can do a wide variety of
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tasks
;
in contrast
, youth that do not believe in
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time
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management
, most of the
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time
are confused
and do a
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small
group of activities. In this situation,
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people
that do various works will have a broad experience about
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tasks
and jobs that it gives rise to a
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better
choice for them.
Additionally
, it has undeniable effects on our minds. When you can
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organize
your assignments and
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tasks
, you can do most of those, in this way, you will be happy about yourself.
For example
, in university, as I managed my
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tasks
and
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time
,
besides
the study I was able to go cinema and
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make
fun with my friends.

To wrap up, The
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management
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skill
is a scientific technique we should
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help
from professionals and
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teachers
that can give advice. By
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management
we will have a great vision about our interests and future.
Therefore
, our choices will be rational,
Moreover
, by doing our obligations we will feel happy.
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IELTS essay Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
457 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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