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beautiful city in Viet nam

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Da Nang is one of the most beautiful city in central Vietnam. Having tropical climate, Danang is hot and wet all the year. This is well-known for tourism. We can enjoy from Ba Na Hill on the top of the mountains to the unique Dragon Bridge in the center of the city. Danang has many beautiful beaches and caves. Da Nang Beach was voted by Forbes magazine as one of the 6 most attractive beaches on the planet. Da Nang city is named the safest city in Vietnam because of the fewest thefts. If I travel to this beautiful city, I will enjoy delicious traditional dishes such as My Quang, Cao Lau, etc. Local people here are very friendly, generous, and hospitable. I love this place and I hope that someday I can visit here in the near future.
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IELTS essay beautiful city in Viet nam

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