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Basic Education and air pollution that government need to focus

Basic Education and air pollution that government need to focus 6L3AG
Thailand is very promising country, but it still has many problems. According to me, bosic educotion and air pollytion are lwo of the biggest issues which the government should focus on. Firstly, there are many problems with the basic education system in Thaijland. For example, most of stuckenis in Thailand hove poor, English stills Here is a and lack of quality rural scheels. These issues should be ppromity ytigavernment. They have to invest more money in rural education solved and develop more English programs with naive teachers. Sey I believe that if thai stulents recievea hetter educshonifwill clevelop Thailand more successfut country. Thailand dia Het roou th, in the world? Another main issue in Thailand is severe air pollution in Hetr O many parts of the courrtry, There are a lot of farmers burning. farmland affer harrest for gererafe improve the field. furhernod y tin the big citjss hove more pollution from vehicle traffic on the road. Both af problens make more Coz whichi; bat! for peoples th eor toy trarnfih for heath sueh as harnful "Govermment could be improve a sore throat, runny nose and trouble bresthing. public transport such as Making More for comeniontel "feople trains transpart, boattransport and busestrarspart: and stfict laws againts burning of farmland! There is So In ardereto people don't have to drive and less pollution. certainly, should tad d it has ao ceaner air that cah make fewer healih problens. To summarize, I believe that the thai govemment has to imprave basic education and solre air pollutien to help this country becone. more successful, and 8 -A cearng.
Thailand is
very
promising country,
but
it
still
has
many
problems.

According to me
,
bosic
educotion
and
air
pollytion
are
lwo
of the biggest

issues which the
government
should focus on.

Firstly
, there are
many
problems with the basic education system in

Thaijland
.
For example
, most of
stuckenis
in Thailand hove poor, English stills

Here is a

and lack of quality rural
scheels
. These issues should be
ppromity


ytigavernment
. They
have to
invest more money in rural education

solved

and develop more English programs with naive teachers.
Sey
I believe

that if
thai
stulents
recievea
hetter
educshonifwill
clevelop
Thailand

more
successfut
country.

Thailand
dia
Het
roou
th
, in the world?

Another main issue in Thailand is severe
air
pollution in

Hetr


O

many
parts of the
courrtry
, There are
a lot of
farmers burning.

farmland
affer
harrest
for

gererafe


improve
the field.

furhernod


y tin the
big
citjss
hove

more pollution from vehicle traffic on the road. Both
af
problens
make


more
Coz
whichi
; bat!
for
peoples
th
eor
toy
trarnfih
for heath
sueh as


harnful


"
Govermment
could be
improve


a sore throat, runny nose and trouble
bresthing
.

public
transport such as

Making

More

for
comeniontel
"
feople


trains
transpart
,
boattransport
and
busestrarspart
: and
stfict
laws
againts
burning of farmland!

There is

So


In
ardereto
people
don't
have to
drive and

less pollution.
certainly
,

should tad d

it has
ao
ceaner
air
that
cah
make
fewer
healih
problens
.

To summarize
, I believe that the
thai
govemment
has to
imprave


basic education and
solre
air
pollutien
to
help
this country
becone
.

more
successful,

and

8

-A
cearng
.
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IELTS essay Basic Education and air pollution that government need to focus

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6.0
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