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Based on researches done by prominent investigators it is observe that,

Based on researches done by prominent investigators it is observe that, Kw230
Based on researches done by prominent investigators it is observed that, 30% of individuals are unhealthy in this nation. We live in an era, where masses are facing ample health issues. This context enumerates the reasons of unhealthy masses who are working in job sector. Under this proclamation, I would like to contemplate upon this view point previously giving my verdict on the same. To begin with, now these days masses are busy in their life, they do ample work to live better lifestyle. To explicate it, masses have not enough time to wake up early in the morning to do physical exercise. For instance, a teacher who spend maximum 8 hours to teach at school or college, however that teacher also open their own private tuition centre to teach a subject. Consequently, it is tough for teacher to do regular exercise. Moreover, number of masses are doing government job, they not live at home, instead of doing physical activity they cannot meet their family members. On the backward side, there are abundant reasons to solve this issues. Every masses should wake up early in the morning and only one hour they do areobic exercise or yoga. I honestly believe, people never face any health issues like Hypertension, Obesity or Stroke. Further, if working individual have not enough time to do exercise, then they muse eat balanced diet food. Owing to this, balanced diet provide Vitamins, Proteins or Carbohydrates. Hence, this is a major beneficial key points to tackle this issue. In conclusion, after considering all view points it seems to me that, to enjoy the glow of good health you must exercise.
Based on researches done by prominent investigators it
is observed
that, 30% of individuals are unhealthy in this nation. We
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in an era, where masses are facing ample health
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
issues
. This context enumerates the reasons of unhealthy masses who are working in job sector. Under this proclamation, I would like to contemplate upon this view point previously giving my verdict on the same.

To
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begin
with,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
these days masses are busy in their life, they do ample work to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
better lifestyle. To explicate it, masses have not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
time to wake up early in the morning to do physical
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
exercise
.
For instance
, a teacher who spend maximum 8 hours to teach at school or college,
however
that teacher
also
open their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
private tuition
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centre
to teach a subject.
Consequently
, it is tough for teacher to do regular
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
exercise
.
Moreover
, number of masses are doing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
job, they not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
at home,
instead
of doing physical activity they cannot
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
their family members.

On the backward side, there are abundant reasons to solve this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
issues
. Every
The noun should be probably in the singular form: "mass"?
masses
should wake up early in the morning and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
one hour they do
Possible spelling mistake found.
areobic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
exercise
or yoga. I
honestly
believe,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
never face any health
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
issues
like Hypertension, Obesity or Stroke.
Further
, if working individual have not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
time to do
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
exercise
, then they muse eat balanced diet food. Owing to this, balanced diet provide Vitamins, Proteins or Carbohydrates.
Hence
, this is a major beneficial key points to tackle this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
issue
.
In conclusion
, after considering all view points it seems to me that, to enjoy the glow of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
health you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
exercise
.
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IELTS essay Based on researches done by prominent investigators it is observe that,

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  American English
3 paragraphs
273 words
6.0
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