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Banning smoking in public

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In modern times, the issue of smoking in public place has become highly controversial. There are those who say that smoking in public areas should be banned, however others believe that it should not. In this essav I will examine both sides of the argument and provide my overall opinion. Generally speaking, there are two main reasons why people believe that government should forbid smoking in places, such as hospital, restaurant, and train stations. Perhaps the main reason why people are in favour of this idea is because cigarette smoke is carcinogenic for the people who breathe it. A good illustration of this is that people who smoke and secondary smokers can develop serious illness such as lung cancer.
In modern times, the issue of smoking in public place has become
highly
controversial. There are those

who say that smoking in public areas should
be banned
,
however
others believe that it should not. In

this
essav
I will examine both sides of the argument and provide my
overall
opinion.

Generally
speaking, there are two main reasons why
people
believe that
government
should forbid

smoking in places, such as hospital, restaurant, and train stations. Perhaps the main reason why
people


are in
favour
of this
idea
is
because
cigarette smoke is carcinogenic for the
people
who breathe it. A

good
illustration of this is that
people
who smoke and secondary smokers can develop serious illness

such as lung cancer.
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IELTS essay Banning smoking in public

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
119 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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