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banning mass tourism is being discussed by governments for a number of reasons

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Banning mass tourism is being discussed by governments for a variety of reasons. Even though they are a number of drawbacks of mass tourism, there are still no consensus about prohibition. In my opinion, whatever the downside of mass tourism, it should be continue a plenty of reasons. In first place, maintain the mass tourism is much more beneficial act instead of prohibit it especially if we consider economical reasons. Since the big amount of foreign people visit the country, there are a huge amount of foreign currency into a country. The main utility of foreign currency is it may help a country’s economical development. It also provides that determine a country’s image in a good way. For instance, thanks to the tourists a country may introduce their cultural heritage to the whole world. It may not be a priority for developed countries since their economy is independently stable and good. Howewer, it is an one heck of an opportunity for developing countries. In spite of loads of benefits, there are a sequence of issues to consider like spread of diseases and environmental problems. Still, these issues are easily solvable. If goverments put non compromisable rules for foreign visitors especially about not the damage natural environment of country and do not allow to enter to the country at least vaccined 2 doses. To summarize, there are contrasting aspects of mass tourism. To give the best decision for everyone’s benefit, goverments should consider their financial power and if they want to pursue the mass tourism, they should make solvations for potential problems.
Banning
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governments
for a variety of reasons.

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mass
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tourism
, there are
still
no consensus about prohibition. In my opinion, whatever the downside of
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mass
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tourism
, it should be
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plenty
of reasons.

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first
place, maintain the
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mass
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tourism
is much more beneficial act
instead
of prohibit it
especially
if we consider
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economical
reasons. Since the
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big
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foreign
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people
visit the
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country
, there are a huge
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foreign
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. The main utility of
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foreign
currency is it may
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country’s
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economical
development. It
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provides that determine a
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country’s
image in a
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good
way.
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country
may introduce their cultural heritage to the whole world. It may not be a priority for developed
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countries
since their economy is
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stable and
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good
.
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developing countries
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goverments
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country
and do not
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allow
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at least
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vaccined
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. To give the best decision for everyone’s benefit,
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goverments
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solvations
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IELTS essay banning mass tourism is being discussed by governments for a number of reasons

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  American English
5 paragraphs
261 words
6.0
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