Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

bad and good habits to have good health

bad and good habits to have good health 1kdrG

From my point of view, health is the most essential in our life. To begin with, having a perfect body, we should usually do regular exercises, keep routine, read books regularly, make our menu by using food pyramid and do not stay up late because it makes our skin bad and makes us feel tired when we do anything. In addition, we need to never give up when we try to do it. Furthermore, the benefits of it are too much as an example: lose weight, make healthy bones, and also prevent diseases like cancer. In conclusion, It is necessary for us to get rid of our bad habits such as watching TV all day without working or jogging, eating too much fast food or any food which we want. It causes many diseases like overweight, maybe It can be cancer.

From my point of view, health is the most essential in our life. To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, having a perfect body, we should usually
 do regular exercises, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 routine, read books regularly
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanufacturecomposeprepareformproducecause
make
 our menu by using food pyramid and do not stay up late This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanufacturecomposeprepareformproducecause
makes
 our skin This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanufacturecomposeprepareformproducecause
makes
 us feel tired when we do anything. In addition
, we need to never give up when we try to do it. Furthermore
, the benefits of it are too much as an example: lose weight, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanufacturecomposeprepareformproducecause
make
 healthy bones, and also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :preclude
prevent
 diseases like cancer. In conclusion
, It is necessary for us to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 rid of our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 habits such as watching TV all day without working or jogging, eating too much This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:quickrapidswiftprompt
fast
 food or any food which we want. It causes This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 diseases like overweight, maybe It can be cancer. 