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The chat gives information about 7 various categories of people living in poverty in 1999 in Australia The largest share belongs to the sole parent 21 percent about 232000 people. 19 percent belongs to single, no children. The next one is belonged to the couples which is had children 12 percent 933000 people. The households had taken 11 percent about 1 837 000 people. 211 000 people(7%)belongs to couples which is they haven’t got children. 6 percent is single aged person about 54 000 people, last one 4% is aged couple 54 000 people. Overall the biggest population belongs to households. The littlest is aged couples about 48 000 people.
The chat gives information about 7 various categories of
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living in poverty in 1999 in Australia

The largest share belongs to the sole parent 21
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about 232000
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. 19
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belongs to single, no children. The
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933000
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. The households had taken 11
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about 1 837 000
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. 211 000
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which is they haven’t
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children. 6
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is single aged person about 54 000
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, last one 4%
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54 000
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IELTS essay povert people are going to have a good time

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
110 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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