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Back Write a response in which you deliberate on the kind of questions that need answers before deciding whether the suggestion and the supporting argument are practical Be certain to clarify how the answers to these questions would aid in assessing the t

Back Write a response in which you deliberate on the kind of questions that need answers before deciding whether the suggestion and the supporting argument are practical Be certain to clarify how the answers to these questions would aid in assessing the t QLMkK
The survey state that, because of awareness program for its resident in Masonville, number of patient increaces in Restora Health Care center and now citing this facts, director of Claris care Health center should start the same program to entice the patient. In the first view statment does not seen any flawed but after the detailed look there is some flawed in the given argument statement and i will show in below three questions. Firstly, do the patient is area is increases because of health awareness conducted by Restora Health Care center in Masonville? if the time of survey maybe there is dieases is spread in that particular area because of this maybe number of patients increases. if above sentence is true then the given original argument is weakened. Secondly, does awareness program really help for Health center in overall nation? the original argument said that, in survey after the number of patient is increases. but they did not mention about anything about how many patient is increases after the awareness program also with not mention the two year numerical data to show the percent increases. if the author of survey not having any above information then the original argument does not hold water. Finally, does the Claris care Health center also get sucess to entice patient in Amway like Restora Health care center? if the Masonville having endemonium ( local dieases) in Mosonville and because this they observed the number of patient but if Amway, does not have any dieases is spread in Amway then maybe the Claris care Health center will be fail to entice the more patient like Restora. if above sentence is true then the survey is weakened. In conclusion, the given argument sentence have many unstated flaws are seen if they show the their entire study and research and evaluate their statement then maybe we should consider survey as a practical.
The
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survey
state that,
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because
of
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awareness
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program
for its resident in
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Masonville
,
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number
of
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patient
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increaces
in
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Restora
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Health
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Care
center and
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now
citing
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this
facts, director of
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Claris
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care
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Health
center should
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start
the same
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program
to entice the
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patient
. In the
first
view
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statment
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does
not
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seen
any flawed
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but
after the detailed look there is
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some
flawed in the
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given
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argument
statement and
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i
will
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show
in below three questions.

Firstly
, do the
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patient
is area is
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increases
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because
of
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health
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awareness
conducted by
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Restora
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Health
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Care
center in
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Masonville
?
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if
the time of
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survey
maybe there is
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dieases
is spread
in that particular area
because of this
maybe
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number
of
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patients
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increases
.
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if
above sentence is true then the
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given
original
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argument
is weakened
.

Secondly
,
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does
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awareness
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program
really
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help
for
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Health
center in
overall
nation?
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the
original
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argument
said that, in
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survey
after the
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number
of
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patient
is
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increases
.
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but
they did not
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mention about anything
about how
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many
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patient
is
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increases
after the
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awareness
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program
also
with not mention the
When a number forms part of an adjectival compound, use a hyphen: "two-year"
two year
numerical data to
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show
the percent
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increases
.
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if
the author of
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survey
not having any above information then the original
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argument
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does
not hold water.

Finally
,
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does
the
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Claris
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care
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Health
center
also
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get
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sucess
to entice
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patient
in Amway like
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Restora
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Health
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care
center?
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if
the
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Masonville
having
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endemonium
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(
local
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dieases
) in
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Mosonville
and
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because
this they observed the
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number
of
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patient
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but
if Amway,
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does
not have any
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dieases
is spread
in Amway then maybe the
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Claris
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care
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Health
center will be fail to entice the more
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patient
like
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Restora
.
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if
above sentence is true then the
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survey
is weakened
.

In conclusion
, the
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given
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argument
sentence have
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many
unstated flaws are
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seen
if they
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show
A determiner cannot combine with a possessive pronoun. Did you mean simply "their entire" or "the entire"?
the their entire
study and research and evaluate their statement then maybe we should consider
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survey
as a practical.
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IELTS essay Back Write a response in which you deliberate on the kind of questions that need answers before deciding whether the suggestion and the supporting argument are practical Be certain to clarify how the answers to these questions would aid in assessing the t

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
316 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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