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Awareness and attitude of each individual are regarded as one of the most effective “vaccines” against COVID 19. To what extend do you agree or disagree? Write an essay to support your opinion.

Awareness and attitude of each individual are regarded as one of the most effective “vaccines” against COVID 19. Write an essay to support your opinion. Dqyb6
It is indisputable that the personal awareness and attitude might be one of the most imperative tools to prevent Covid 19 apart from vaccines. From my perspective, I completely agree with this idea because of some following reasons about which I will mention in this essay. Truthfully, each person might be able to thoroughly aware about corona virus, which might have a profitable impact on this problem. People who have clear awareness about corona pandemic might have a variety of appropriate ways to stop Covid 19 from them. In other words, because they perceive profoundly this ailment’s characteristics, they might able to know how to prevent them properly according to their knowledge. For example, they use the face mark effectively resulting in reducing the rate of infection when they accidentally contact to Covid 19 patients. Therefore, human might be simply protect their safety without vaccines. Moreover, human’s attitude might be one of the foremost factors which enables them get rid of this hazardous disease. Corona virus might be able to be eliminated completely if people obey constantly the governments’ policy as well as positive thinking and belief. For example, people merely stay at home while the pandemic are becoming exponentially detrimental to limit the spreading of corona virus for others. Additionally, they report to local authorities immediately about their own condition and schedule faithfully if they might be likely to infect, which might help them have a rapid treatment as well as preventing Covid 19’s infection from community. In conclusion, it is undeniable that Corona virus pandemic may be able to be removed wholly if each person have right awareness as well as attitude.
It is indisputable that the personal awareness and attitude
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be one of the most imperative tools to
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prevent
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Covid 19
apart from vaccines. From my perspective, I completely
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agree
with this
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following reasons about which I will mention in this essay.

Truthfully
, each person
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might
be
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able
to
thoroughly
aware about corona
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virus
, which
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might
have a profitable impact on this problem.
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People
who have
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clear
awareness about corona pandemic
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might
have a variety of appropriate ways to
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stop
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Covid 19
from them.
In other words
,
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because
they perceive
profoundly
this ailment’s characteristics, they
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might
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able
to know how to
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prevent
them
properly
according to their knowledge.
For example
, they
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use
the face mark
effectively
resulting in reducing the rate of infection when they
accidentally
contact to
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Covid 19
patients.
Therefore
, human
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might
be
simply
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protect
their safety without vaccines.

Moreover
, human’s attitude
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might
be one of the foremost factors which enables them
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get
rid of this hazardous disease. Corona
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virus
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might
be
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able
to
be eliminated
completely if
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people
obey
constantly
the
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governments
’ policy
as well
as
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positive
thinking and belief.
For example
,
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people
merely
stay at home while the pandemic are becoming
exponentially
detrimental to limit the spreading of corona
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virus
for others.
Additionally
, they report to local authorities immediately about their
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own
condition and schedule
faithfully
if they
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might
be likely to infect, which
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might
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help
them have a rapid treatment
as well
as preventing
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Covid 19
’s infection from community.

In conclusion
, it is undeniable that Corona
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virus
pandemic may be
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able
to
be removed
wholly if each person have right awareness
as well
as attitude.
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IELTS essay Awareness and attitude of each individual are regarded as one of the most effective “vaccines” against COVID 19. Write an essay to support your opinion.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
274 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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