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all sides of volunteering programs

all sides of volunteering programs QKP19
Nowadays, in our world, the idea of doing something for free might sound strange. However, it strongly depends on how you look at it. One of that is volunteering which has become popular in recent decades, is one of the greatest examples of how a job can pay off not with just money. It may sound paradoxical, volunteering is one of the easiest ways to find a job. After graduating from a college or university, many get stuck in the situation of trying to find a job, but needing working experience, you cannot obtain working experience because no one hires you. Having relevant work experience obtained during volunteering and specifying it in your CV can be a kickstarter for your career, because nowadays more and more employers tend to count volunteering as actual work experience. Also, volunteering is a natural way of socialization and getting to know your surroundings, meeting new people, and finding useful contacts. Besides, volunteering could make a great example for your children, if you want to teach them responsibility, compassion, and how one person can make a difference by personally participating in solving it. Despite of that, volunteering has peculiar problems. For instance, people have family, work, responsibilities, in short, busy schedules. And they need money for continue their life normally. That is why majority people can not separate time for be volunteer. Though all negative sides, volunteering is a great alternative to a number of other activities, since it can help you acquire work experience and get a job, makes you more sociable, and turns you into a good role model for your children.
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job
can pay off not with
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is one of the easiest ways to find a
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job
. After graduating from a college or university,
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needing working
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experience
, you cannot obtain working
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experience
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because
no one hires you. Having relevant
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obtained during
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kickstarter
for your career,
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as actual
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is a natural way of socialization and getting to know your surroundings, meeting new
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people
, and finding useful contacts.
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has peculiar problems.
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have family,
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, responsibilities, in short, busy schedules. And they need money for continue their life
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can not separate time for be
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Though all
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sides,
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help
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IELTS essay all sides of volunteering programs

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
269 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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