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Avoidane and Reduction Strategies in communication

Avoidane and Reduction Strategies in communication 2a6Ob
In the middle of a conversation, we may encounter moments in which we are not comfortable in expressing our thoughts regarding a particular topic or have absolutely no clue on how to respond. During these instances we make use of the Avoidance Strategies by incorporating the topic shifting methods. If an individual brings out a subject matter, instead of elaborating and giving out their opinions, they choose to change the topic by steering the conversation towards another direction. This is the most common and natural method of reduction as you are still able to express your thoughts but just not through the initial topic given. For example, as one asks a question and we instead ask if we could use the bathroom, compliment their attire, or distract them with a praise or an interesting fact are all counted as moments on which we avoid the initial question. If we speak words to topics that may seem sensitive to us or is still puzzled at the time, it may lead to further quarrels, misunderstanding, and miscommunication that may completely block communication from one another,
In the middle of a conversation, we may encounter moments in which we are not comfortable in expressing our thoughts regarding a particular
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topic
or have
absolutely
no clue on how to respond. During these instances we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
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use
of the Avoidance Strategies by incorporating the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
topic
shifting methods. If an individual brings out a
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "subject".
subject matter
,
instead
of elaborating and giving out their opinions, they choose to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
topic
by steering the conversation towards another direction. This is the most common and natural method of reduction as you are
still
able to express your thoughts
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but
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
not through the initial
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topic
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given
.
For example
, as one asks a
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
question and
we
instead
ask if we could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
the bathroom, compliment their attire, or distract them with a praise or an interesting fact are all counted as moments on which we avoid the initial question. If we speak words to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
topics
that may seem sensitive to us or is
still
puzzled at the time, it may lead to
further
quarrels, misunderstanding, and miscommunication that may completely block communication from one another,
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IELTS essay Avoidane and Reduction Strategies in communication

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