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Summary of yourself and work goals

Summary of yourself and work goals 7LWEn
I'm a student at Hutech University majoring in automation and control engineering, but I have passion and love for creative work and jobs that require communication skills. Therefore, in order to feed my passion, I want to learn a lot of knowledge, gain a lot of experience, constantly challenge and develop myself at work. From there, bring a lot of value to customers as well as benefits for the company
I'm a student at
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Hutech
University majoring in automation and control engineering,
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but
I have passion and
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love
for creative work and jobs that require communication
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skills
.
Therefore
, in order to feed my passion, I want to learn
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a lot of
knowledge, gain
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a lot of
experience,
constantly
challenge and develop myself at work. From there, bring
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a lot of
value to customers
as well
as benefits for the
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company
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IELTS essay Summary of yourself and work goals

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
69 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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