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It is undeniable fact that the number of students who go overseas studying is on the rise. It seems to me that there are several reasons for this phenomenon. I am also convinced that it is a desirable trend which has positive impacts on the development of their home country. This essay will elaborate on the primary reasons for the trend as well as its desirable benefits to the country as a whole.
It is undeniable fact that the number of students who go overseas studying is on the rise. It seems to me that there are several reasons for this phenomenon. I am
also
convinced that it is a desirable trend which has
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
impacts on the development of their home country. This essay will elaborate on the primary reasons for the trend
as well
as its desirable benefits to the country as a whole.
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IELTS essay It/ no doubt/ the gap/ between/ wealthy countries/ deprived ones/ get larger. Thus, it/ advocated/ the former/ must/ financially back up/ the latter/ stabilize/ development/ whole world. From my personal perspective, I totally/ agree/ point of view. This essay/ grant/ chance/ discuss/ issue/ more detail.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
73 words
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Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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