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Average monthly household by British households

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The expenses on rent, electric bills, and transport all increased, with $600 being the most the British have spent in during the past decade, which is a significant increase from just over $400 in 1990. Utility bills and transport had a gradual increase in expenditure of about $100 in past three decades, with the amount in 2010 reaching up to about $250 and slightly above $150 respectively. On the contrary, money spent on groceries and entertainment remained almost similar for all 3 years, with entertainment even showing a small decline from just over $100 to exactly $100. The variation in groceries expenditure was also slight with an increase of about $30 from just above $300.
The expenses on rent, electric bills, and transport all increased, with $600 being the most the British have spent in during the past decade, which is a significant increase from
just
over $400 in 1990. Utility bills and transport had a gradual increase in expenditure of about $100 in past three decades, with the amount in 2010 reaching up to about $250 and
slightly
above $150
respectively
.

On the contrary
, money spent on groceries and entertainment remained almost similar for all 3 years, with entertainment even showing a
small
decline from
just
over $100 to exactly $100. The variation in groceries expenditure was
also
slight with an increase of about $30 from
just
above $300.
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IELTS essay Average monthly household by British households

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