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avantages of living big city

avantages of living big city ORXRN
Nowadays, the number of people who move to urban area increased. In my point of view, this trend brings more benefits than disadvantages. Living in big cities has several advantages that make people like enjoying their lives. First of all, people have more opportunities of jobs and higher living standard. Cities concentrate many factories attracts domestic and international investors, which provides good jobs with high income and opportunities to promote. So no matter what you studied no matter what your background chances are you're going to be able to find a pretty good job in a big city.
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to urban area increased. In my point of view, this trend brings more benefits than disadvantages.

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cities has several advantages that
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make
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people
like enjoying their
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First of all
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people
have more opportunities of jobs and higher living standard. Cities concentrate
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many
factories attracts domestic and international investors, which provides
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good
jobs with high income and opportunities to promote.
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So
no matter what you studied no matter what your background chances are you're going to be able to find a pretty
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good
job in a
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big
city.
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IELTS essay avantages of living big city

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
98 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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