Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

ation is seeing a dramatic

ation is seeing a dramatic 2KlPM

There is no doubt that the world population is seeing a dramatic rise day by day, attracting some arguments about whether new accommodation is built in existing cities or constructed in empty land. By surviving do these two opposition views have its own advantages and disadvantages which will be turned to considerations. One of the major advantages of buying houses in current cities is that it would bring residents of the city many benefits in multiple ways. Workers in some big cities such as China, all prefer to buy a newly constructed house which is located near their work instead of a new town, to reduce time and transportation funds. Moreover, cities which have existed for a long time, are completely equipped with enough social facilities like supermarkets, shopping centres, which can easily suit the demand of people. By contrast, a recently developed town must take over ten years to fulfill potential conditions for customers to live a life full of variety. On the other hand, some environmental measures can be treated when moving residents in new cities. The decline of individual vehicles would lead to the reduction of air pollution because of the less amount of carbon dioxide which is emitted on a daily basis. And yet, due to the fact that in some big cities, the exceedingly high amount of gas emission is not contributing to the polluted atmosphere but also the alarming concern to both principals and households. For instance, the recent report by The World Health Organization ( WHO ) suggests that the number of people affected by airborne infections is 20% higher in cities compared to new towns that were formed just a couple of years ago. In conclusion, while there are both positive and negative effects of the decision to build new accommodation, there are also some factors which are needed for each survey. Therefore, a thorough suggestion is required before starting an infrastructure project.

There is no doubt that the world population is seeing a dramatic rise day by day, attracting This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 arguments about whether You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 accommodation is built
 in existing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
 or constructed in empty land. By surviving do these two opposition views have its This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 advantages and disadvantages which will be turned
 to considerations.

One of the major advantages of buying This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
 is that it would bring residents of the city This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 benefits in multiple ways. Workers in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
 such as China, all prefer to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 a newly
 constructed This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 which is located
 near their work instead
 of a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 town, to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 time and transportation funds. Moreover
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
 which have existed for a long time, are completely equipped with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 social facilities like supermarkets, shopping Possible spelling mistake. 'centres' is British English.centers
centres
, which can easily
 suit the demand of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. By contrast, a recently developed town This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 take over ten years to fulfill potential conditions for customers to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 a life full of variety.

On the other hand
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 environmental measures can be treated
 when moving residents in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
. The decline of individual vehicles would lead to the reduction of air pollution This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of the less amount of carbon dioxide which is emitted
 on a daily basis. And yet
, due to the fact that in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
, the exceedingly
 high amount of gas emission is not contributing to the polluted atmosphere This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 the alarming concern to both principals and households. For instance
, the recent report by The World Health Organization Don't put a space after the opening parenthesis(
( 
WHODon't put a space before the closing parenthesis)
 )
 suggests that the number of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :impacted
affected
 by airborne infections is 20% higher in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
 compared to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 towns that were formed
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 a couple of years ago.

In conclusion
, while there are both This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 effects of the decision to build You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 accommodation, there are also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 factors which are needed
 for each survey. Therefore
, a thorough suggestion is required
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 starting an infrastructure project. 