Having proper activities for leisure times have an important role in happiness of life. If people spend their free times in activities that bring energy and charge them foe life they will be successful in life. A lot of people have the opportunity to go to university or colleges and period of attending in these academic places could be good memory for them if they spend their free times in other activities such as sport or social activities. So I believe that university or colleges should support sports and social activities for two important reasons.
The main reason is that students need to recover their energy and have relax time during their studies. If students attend in a condition that they have fun and also can do social activities the study would be bearable. For example I remember that during my university studies I was a member of mountain climbing group and every week we had a trip to a mountain near the university because of existence of various beautiful mountains surrounding the university. This weekly program was my motivation to spend the hard works studying and doing projects. Because thinking about weekend which I have plan to go to nature gave me energy to do my duties. As you can see side activities in university have positive effects on student efficiencies.
The second reason is that even though university or colleges are places for study and research, they are also small societies which need sports and social activities. Without these activities university will fail to introduce graduated people which are able to create a developed society. For instance, I read in paper about the effects of universities on culture of cities. Based on this article the cities that have big university also have energetic and active environment if the students of the university be active. Introducing active and energetic students to society need universities spend money on activities that make students happy and gives them energy.
In conclusion I believe that sports and social activities should receive financial supports from university because it gives energy to students and make them active in society. Finally I think attending of students in sports and social activities should have be mandatory for them because a lot of students don' t know the effects of them on their life.
Having proper
activities
for leisure
times
have an
important
role in happiness of
life
. If
people
spend
their free
times
in
activities
that bring
energy
and charge them foe
life
they will be successful in
life
.
A lot of
people
have the opportunity to go to
university
or colleges and period of attending in these academic places could be
good
memory for them if they
spend
their free
times
in other
activities
such as
sport
or
social
activities
.
So
I believe that
university
or colleges should support
sports
and
social
activities
for two
important
reasons.
The main reason is that
students
need to recover their
energy
and have
relax
time
during their
studies
. If
students
attend in a condition that they have fun and
also
can do
social
activities
the
study
would be bearable. For
example I
remember that during my
university
studies
I was a member of mountain climbing group and every week we had a trip to a mountain near the
university
because
of existence of various
beautiful
mountains surrounding the
university
. This weekly program was my motivation to
spend
the
hard
works studying and doing projects.
Because
thinking about weekend which I have plan to go to nature gave me
energy
to do my duties.
As
you can
see
side
activities
in
university
have
positive
effects on
student
efficiencies.
The second reason is that
even though
university
or colleges are places for
study
and research, they are
also
small
societies
which need
sports
and
social
activities
. Without these
activities
university
will fail to introduce graduated
people
which are able to create a developed
society
.
For instance
, I read in paper about the effects of
universities
on culture of cities. Based on this article the cities that have
big
university
also
have energetic and
active
environment if the
students
of the
university
be
active
. Introducing
active
and energetic
students
to
society
need
universities
spend
money on
activities
that
make
students
happy and gives them energy.
In
conclusion I
believe that
sports
and
social
activities
should receive financial supports from
university
because
it gives
energy
to
students
and
make
them
active
in
society
.
Finally
I
think
attending of
students
in
sports
and
social
activities
should have
be
mandatory for them
because
a lot of
students
don&
#039; t know the effects of them on their
life
.
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