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At one high school, more of the students than ever before have been caught cheating on their homework assignments. For example, many of students have asked other students to provide them with answers for assignment. The school is considering making a chan v.1

At one high school, more of the students than ever before have been caught cheating on their homework assignments. For example, many of students have asked other students to provide them with answers for assignment. The school is considering making a chan v. 1
Science is the source of all the advancements in the world. For a country to advance and prosper, more resources ought to be deployed by the government in teaching sciences instead of other subjects. I agree with this view as science is the only subject, which not only enables us to identify the causes of real-life problems, but also assists in finding their solutions. Countries come across various issues in numerous walks of life, such as food, water, healthcare, and the environment. To overcome any problem, it is necessary to ascertain the root cause of the problem. Science teaches how to look at any underlying situation and analyse the factors related to it, and drive conclusions accordingly. For example, science greatly contributed to discovering the causes of diseases that costed several human lives in the past, while those diseases could easily be prevented and cured. If science was not introduced to the masses, humanity would not be able to survive today. Moreover, besides ascertaining the core factors of any issue, science has also guided humans to explore the solutions to those issues. Due to the nature of the subject, science encourages experimentation, which not only leads to the solutions to a particular problem at hand, but also benefits us with the knowledge that can be applied in solving other problems. For instance, when scientists were exploring oil as the energy source they discovered natural gas, which is more environment-friendly and economical as compared to the oil. In conclusion, while other people’s opinions may vary, in my opinion, for a country to prosper and compete with the rest of the world, the governments ought to allocate ample resources in teaching science to the public as it will enable them to identify the contemporary problems yet solutions.
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Science
is the source of all the advancements in the world. For a country to advance and prosper, more resources ought to
be deployed
by the
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government
in teaching
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sciences
instead
of other subjects. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with this view as
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science
is the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
subject, which not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
enables us to identify the causes of real-life
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problems
,
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but
also
assists in finding their solutions.

Countries
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come
across various issues in numerous walks of life, such as food, water, healthcare, and the environment. To overcome any
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problem
, it is necessary to ascertain the root cause of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problem
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Science
teaches how to look at any underlying situation and
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analyse
the factors related to it, and drive conclusions
accordingly
.
For example
,
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science
greatly
contributed to discovering the causes of diseases that costed several human
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lives
in the past, while those diseases could
easily
be
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prevented
and cured. If
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science
was not introduced to the masses, humanity would not be able to survive
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today
.

Moreover
,
besides
ascertaining the core factors of any issue,
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science
has
also
guided humans to explore the solutions to those issues. Due to the nature of the subject,
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science
encourages experimentation, which not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
leads to the solutions to a particular
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problem
at hand,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
benefits us with the knowledge that can
be applied
in solving other
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problems
.
For instance
, when scientists were exploring oil as the energy source they discovered natural gas, which is more environment-friendly and economical as compared to the oil.

In conclusion
, while other
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
’s opinions may vary, in my opinion, for a country to prosper and compete with the rest of the world, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
governments
ought to allocate ample resources in teaching
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
science
to the public as it will enable them to identify the contemporary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problems
yet
solutions.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay At one high school, more of the students than ever before have been caught cheating on their homework assignments. For example, many of students have asked other students to provide them with answers for assignment. The school is considering making a chan v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
295 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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