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At first it was an intimidating task, partly because of the responsibilities I carry, partly because I did not have any ideas. However, looking back at my own student career, I realized the most engaging classes were the ones that motivated me to learn. Looking back upon my gaming career, I realized what keeps players motivated is continuous innovation.

At first it was an intimidating task, partly because of the responsibilities I carry, partly because I did not have any ideas. However, looking back at my own student career, I realized the most engaging classes were the ones that motivated me to learn. Looking back upon my gaming career, I realized what keeps players motivated is continuous innovation. 73KqA

As a prominent supporter of education, I had the honor of interning at Mcgraw Hill last summer, where I was quickly put to work on improving an online learning system. My task was a simple but difficult one: to make the learning system more attractive and engaging for learners. At first it was an intimidating task, partly because of the responsibilities I carry, partly because I did not have any ideas. However, looking back at my own student career, I realized the most engaging classes were the ones that motivated me to learn. Looking back upon my gaming career, I realized what keeps players motivated is continuous innovation.

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