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As we are facing more and more problems which affect the whole planet good relationships between the different countries are becoming more important than ever before to what extent do you agree or disagree ?

As we are facing more and more problems which affect the whole planet good relationships between the different countries are becoming more important than ever before gLP3
The last few decades It has been noted that the environmental problems are increasing at alarming drink looking at a current scenario world is dealing with animals global problem which has the detrimental effect world what due to the fact that relationships between other countries since paramount i completely agree with this notion this essay will highlight my agreements into the accompanying passages. There are many compelling reasons that held their relations with the neighborhood nation is more essential when host country suffering from terrible atmosphere if fact they can take anywhere from other countries but it can be only possible when they have any will relationship with them take an example of australia is a country which is heavily affected by ozone depletion people know that ozone layer protect the people from uv radiations however the research indicates that it causes a because of chlorofluorocarbons and main activity related to this is carried out in usa now we can only be possible when australia influence usa to find a solution to prevent ozone depletion otherwise it cannot be curb. Moreover, not only the environment problems are affecting the entire world but problem of medical trading also influence it by helping each other they not only save their own country but also saving the world for instance coronavirus is it is highly contentious and life taking virus which spread all over the world if people are not help each other it will kill the whole earth india centre firebox of paracetamol to usa and character them it is an hour of need because when the nation help or that it will definitely help them in the future whenever they need help To conclude, I firmly believe that in a hard time countries hulk and proven as a boon for other countries and it only protect one but whole the world.
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been noted
that the environmental
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problems
are increasing at alarming drink looking at a
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current
scenario
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world
is dealing with animals global
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problem
which has the detrimental effect
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world
what due to the fact that relationships between
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other
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countries
since paramount
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i
completely
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agree
with this notion this essay will highlight my agreements into the accompanying passages. There are
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many
compelling reasons that held their relations with the neighborhood nation is more essential when host
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country
suffering from terrible atmosphere if fact they can take anywhere from
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other
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countries
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but
it can be
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only
possible when they have any will relationship with them take an example of
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australia
is a
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country
which is
heavily
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affected
by ozone depletion
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people
know that ozone layer protect the
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people
from
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uv
radiations
however
the research indicates that it causes a
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because
of chlorofluorocarbons and main activity related to this
is carried
out in
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usa
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now
we can
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only
be possible when
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australia
influence
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usa
to find a solution to
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prevent
ozone depletion
otherwise
it cannot be
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.
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, not
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only
the environment
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problems
are affecting the entire
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world
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but
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problem
of medical trading
also
influence it by helping each
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other
they not
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only
save their
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own
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country
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but
also
saving the
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world
for instance
coronavirus is it is
highly
contentious and life taking virus which spread all over the
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world
if
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people
are not
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help
each
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other
it will kill the whole earth
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india
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centre
firebox of paracetamol to
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usa
and character them it is an hour of need
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because
when the nation
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help
or that it will definitely
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help
them in the future whenever they need
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help
To conclude
, I
firmly
believe that in a
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hard
time
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countries
hulk and proven as a boon for
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other
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countries
and it
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only
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protect
one
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but
whole the
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world
.

IELTS essay As we are facing more and more problems which affect the whole planet good relationships between the different countries are becoming more important than ever before

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
310 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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