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Education is the single most important factor in the development of a country. Do you agree?

Education is the single most important factor in the development of a country. Do you agree? 6grK
I think in one point that is the most important thing, becaouse obviusly, if a society is better educatied than another than, it can develop much faster. But the money is also main becaouse with out that you can be any clever you can’t buy for example material for construction sites. So over all i don’t agree with this thought, beacouse there is not just one factor in the development of a country, but for sure education is one of the most impoortant exponent to make a fast develop country.
I
think
in one point
that is
the most
important
thing,
becaouse
obviusly
, if a society is better
educatied
than another than, it can develop much faster.
But
the money is
also
main
becaouse
with out
that you can be any clever you can’t
buy
for example
material for construction sites.
So
over all
i
don’t
agree
with this
thought
,
beacouse
there is not
just
one factor in the development of a country,
but
for sure education is one of the most
impoortant
exponent to
make
a
fast
develop country.
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IELTS essay Education is the single most important factor in the development of a country. Do you agree?

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