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Education is the single most important factor in the development of a country. Do you agree?

Education is the single most important factor in the development of a country. Do you agree? 6grK
I think in one point that is the most important thing, becaouse obviusly, if a society is better educatied than another than, it can develop much faster. But the money is also main becaouse with out that you can be any clever you can’t buy for example material for construction sites. So over all i don’t agree with this thought, beacouse there is not just one factor in the development of a country, but for sure education is one of the most impoortant exponent to make a fast develop country.
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IELTS essay Education is the single most important factor in the development of a country. Do you agree?

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  American English
1 paragraphs
90 words
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