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As thou art to thyself. Such was the very armor he had on When he the ambitious Norway combated.

As thou art to thyself. Such was the very armor he had on When he the ambitious Norway combated. dr3rX
As thou art to thyself. Such was the very armor he had on When he the ambitious Norway combated. So frowned he once when, in an angry parle, He smote the sledded Polacks on the ice. ’Tis strange. Thus twice before, and jump at this dead hour, With martial stalk hath he gone by our watch. In what particular thought to work I know not, But in the gross and scope of mine opinion This bodes some strange eruption to our state. Good now, sit down, and tell me, he that knows, Why this same strict and most observant watch So nightly toils the subject of the land, And why such daily cast of brazen cannon And foreign mart for implements of war, Why such impress of shipwrights, whose sore task Does not divide the Sunday from the week. What might be toward that this sweaty haste Doth make the night joint laborer with the day? Who is ’t that can inform me? That can I. At least the whisper goes so: our last king, Whose image even but now appeared to us, Was, as you know, by Fortinbras of Norway, Thereto pricked on by a most emulate pride, Dared to the combat; in which our valiant Hamlet (For so this side of our known world esteemed him) Did slay this Fortinbras, who by a sealed compact, Well ratified by law and heraldry, Did forfeit, with his life, all those his lands Which he stood seized of, to the conqueror.
As thou art to thyself.

Such was the
very
armor he had on

When
he
the ambitious Norway combated.

So
frowned he once when, in an angry
parle
,

He smote the sledded
Polacks
on the ice.

Tis
strange.

Thus
twice
before
, and jump at this dead hour,

With martial stalk hath he gone by our
watch
.

In what particular
thought
to work I know not,

But
in the gross and scope of mine opinion

This bodes
some
strange eruption to our state.

Good
now
, sit down, and
tell
me, he that knows,

Why this same strict and most observant
watch


So
nightly toils the subject of the land,

And why such daily cast of brazen cannon

And foreign mart for implements of war,

Why such impress of shipwrights, whose sore task

Does not divide the Sunday from the week.

What might be toward that this sweaty haste

Doth
make
the night joint laborer with the day?

Who
is ’t
that can inform me?

That can I.

At least the whisper goes
so
: our last king,

Whose image even
but
now
appeared to us,

Was, as you know, by
Fortinbras
of Norway,

Thereto pricked on by a most emulate pride,

Dared to the combat; in which our valiant Hamlet

(For
so
this side of our known world esteemed him)

Did slay this
Fortinbras
, who by a sealed compact,

Well ratified by law and heraldry,

Did forfeit, with his life, all
those his lands


Which he stood seized of, to the conqueror.
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IELTS essay As thou art to thyself. Such was the very armor he had on When he the ambitious Norway combated.

Essay
  American English
23 paragraphs
250 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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