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As the number of cars increase, more money has to be spent on road systems. Some people think the government should pay for this. Others, however, think that the drivers should cover this cost. Discuss both view and give your opinion. v.1

As the number of cars increase, more money has to be spent on road systems. Some people think the government should pay for this. Others, however, think that the drivers should cover this cost. v. 1
Food is the most basic elements which we require daily. With the advent of new technology people have found out ways to prolong the shelf life of food. This eventually has an impact on the lifestyle of people. This essay will discuss the reasons how the change in cooking habits has influenced our lives. To begin with, the lifestyle of people has changed drastically over the last few decades. It is justifiable evident that people spend most of their time working to have a better life. Such people prefer to buy ready-made food or use processed food to feed themselves. Cooking processed food is not an arduous task and is less time consuming. Also, individuals who don’t know how to cook reply on such ready to be consumed food. For instance, companies like Fast-Cook has different versions of processed meat available which is easy to prepare and ready to be consumed in 5 minutes. In addition, the company is making huge profit on a year-by-year which basis, which supports the claim that processed food is a hit among current generation. On the other hand, regular consumption of processed food has severe repercussions on the body. Over-reliance on such food items can lead to allergies, skin infection and involuntary bowel movements. For example, research has highlighted excess consumption of processed food can lead to various forms of cancers. The preservatives used in processed food are known to have carcinogenic elements and thus chances of a person encountering with cancer soon increases. In the longer run processed food items can lead to severe health complications. Thus, to assume that such easy to cook food items have improved the way we live is completely preposterous. To conclude, food is the most essential element which defines the well being of the individual. For a healthy and stable life and individual should consume fresh and nutritious food.
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is the most basic elements which we require daily. With the advent of new technology
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people
have found out ways to prolong the shelf life of
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food
. This
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has an impact on the lifestyle of
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people
. This essay will discuss the reasons how the
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change
in cooking habits has influenced our
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lives
.

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begin
with, the lifestyle of
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people
has
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changed
drastically
over the last few decades. It is justifiable evident that
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people
spend most of their time working to have a better life. Such
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people
prefer to
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buy
ready-made
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food
or
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use
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processed
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food
to feed themselves. Cooking
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processed
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food
is not an arduous task and is less
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time consuming
.
Also
, individuals who don’t know how to cook reply on such ready to
be consumed
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food
.
For instance
,
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companies
like
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Fast
-Cook has
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different
versions of
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processed
meat available which is easy to prepare and ready to
be consumed
in 5 minutes.
In addition
, the
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company
is making huge profit on a year-by-year which basis, which supports the claim that
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processed
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food
is a hit among
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current
generation.

On the other hand
, regular consumption of
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processed
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food
has severe repercussions on the body. Over-reliance on such
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food
items can lead to allergies, skin infection and involuntary bowel movements.
For example
, research has highlighted excess consumption of
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processed
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food
can lead to various forms of cancers. The preservatives
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used
in
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processed
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food
are known
to have carcinogenic elements and
thus
chances of a person encountering with cancer
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soon
increases. In the longer run
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processed
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food
items can lead to severe health complications.
Thus
, to assume that such easy to cook
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food
items have
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improved
the way we
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live
is completely preposterous.

To conclude
,
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food
is the most essential element which defines the
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well being
of the individual. For a healthy and stable life and individual should consume fresh and nutritious
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food
.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay As the number of cars increase, more money has to be spent on road systems. Some people think the government should pay for this. Others, however, think that the drivers should cover this cost. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
312 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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