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As tablets have become more prevalent, a new debate has formed over whether schools should switch from print textbooks to digital textbooks on tablets and EReaders.

As tablets have become more prevalent, a new debate has formed over whether schools should switch from print textbooks to digital textbooks on tablets and EReaders. 06o59
It is often argued that in the near future print textbooks can be replaced by digital textbooks for the further time at schools. This assumption is supported and refuted by many. In my opinion we should stick to the classic approach to learning because it has proven its viability over the years. On the one hand, we can observe the considerable convenience to carry a tablet or EReader instead of large quantities of books which may cause backpack-related injuries because such digital devices are known to hold hundreds of textbooks. Also tablets update instantly. We do not have to search corrections at the end of the book or, even worse, the next edition. Although, despite the apparent attractiveness of the last feature, digital textbooks may be affected by cyber attacks (or digital textbooks may undergo cyber attacks). And the needed information can be disappear in a heartbeat. On the other hand, many people consider that using digital devices is related with a range of ailments. Eye strain and migraines that are provoken by the screen flicker, musculoskeletal disorders – all these disorders have a tragic effect on our life. Also there is the indescribable feeling of touching the paper instead of clicking on the screen. Finally, I would like to notice that paper book helps focus better on the learned(? ) material (on the material being studied). This is due to the fact that tablets and EReaders have many distractors such as internet or exciting games. In conclusion, taking into account all that is written above, schools should not switch from print textbooks to digital textbooks for educational aims because paper workbooks have proved its efficiency and it will remain timeless classic in the long run.
It is
often
argued that in the near future print
textbooks
can
be replaced
by digital
textbooks
for the
further
time at schools. This assumption
is supported
and refuted by
many
. In my opinion we should stick to the classic approach to learning
because
it has proven its viability over the years.

On the one hand, we can observe the considerable convenience to carry a tablet or
EReader
instead
of large quantities of books which may cause backpack-related injuries
because
such digital devices
are known
to hold hundreds of
textbooks
.
Also
tablets update
instantly
. We do not
have to
search corrections at the
end
of the book or, even worse, the
next
edition. Although, despite the apparent attractiveness of the last feature, digital
textbooks
may be
affected
by
cyber attacks
(or digital
textbooks
may undergo
cyber attacks
). And the needed information can be
disappear
in a heartbeat.

On the other hand
,
many
people
consider that using digital devices
is related
with a range of ailments. Eye strain and migraines that are
provoken
by the screen flicker, musculoskeletal disorders
all these disorders have a tragic effect on our life.
Also
there is the indescribable feeling of touching the paper
instead
of clicking on the screen.
Finally
, I would like to notice that paper book
helps
focus better on the learned(?
)
material (on the material
being studied
).
This is due to the fact that
tablets and
EReaders
have
many
distractors
such as internet or exciting games.

In conclusion
, taking into account all that
is written
above, schools should not switch from print
textbooks
to digital
textbooks
for educational aims
because
paper workbooks have proved its efficiency and it will remain timeless classic in the long run.
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IELTS essay As tablets have become more prevalent, a new debate has formed over whether schools should switch from print textbooks to digital textbooks on tablets and EReaders.

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4 paragraphs
286 words
5.5
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