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Without any qualms, momey is a prime factor behind the race among prople in ehich everybody os trying to surpass each other. it is believed that masses spemd their adulyhood at work whereas job satisfaction os a crucial element for the well being of an individual. Tje job satisfaction is the mustery of happimess but it depends on vigrous gactors such as cooperation, facilities and many more. To plunge into, success is directly proportional to money that peson earns. the job satisfaction for people somehow, depends upon earning bevaise the work hard for the whole day. and they deserves good salaries. therefore the other condition for satisfaction as well as people damand is cooperation with the co worlers as well. as their parteners to achieve goal. to examplify, a school cannot progress without tje cooperation of staff with manahement.
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is a prime factor behind the race among
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prople
in
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ehich
everybody
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trying to surpass each other.
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it
is believed
that masses
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spemd
their
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adulyhood
at work whereas job
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satisfaction
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os
a crucial element for the
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well being
of an individual.
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Tje
job
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satisfaction
is the
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mustery
of
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happimess
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it depends on
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vigrous
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gactors
such as cooperation, facilities and
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many
more. To plunge into, success is
directly
proportional to money that
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peson
earns.
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the
job
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satisfaction
for
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people
somehow, depends upon earning
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bevaise
the work
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hard
for the whole day.
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and
they
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deserves
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good
salaries.
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therefore
the other condition for
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satisfaction
as well
as
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people
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damand
is cooperation with the co
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worlers
as well
.
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as
their
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parteners
to achieve goal.
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to
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examplify
, a school cannot progress without
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cooperation of staff with
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IELTS essay As most people spend a major part of their life at work, job. . .

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