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As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers? v.5

As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers? v. 5
It is irrefutable that doing work has become the most important part of our human life. Although proffering their qualitative adult life at work, it is also necessary to get job satisfaction from one person. This essay will intend to analyse that what are the factors accounted for job satisfaction and also discuss some real-world perspective of job satisfaction. There are several reasons include which impart job satisfaction. The predominant factor is that one job should consist of a higher income. It is prevalent for those people who work for money. So, they can live a good lifestyle and fulfil their desires. As the basic needs of the family are increasing day by day, a higher income is significant. For example, one survey conducted by Forbes magazines claims that only 2% of the world's population have satisfied with their job. Another upholding factor is that a company should provide a positive working environment. Because employees can feel better and work smoothly without any stress. Moreover, job satisfaction also includes monetary incentives and frequent work holidays. Therefore, these factors are essential for job satisfaction. However, all workers cannot attain job satisfaction duly in this real world. Firstly, there are complaints, which is done by some employees. They say that most companies provide much work because they want to stay in the competition. As a result, these workers have to work for more than stipulated hours. Moreover, such organizations give a short amount of time to complete a task. To this, they feel a burden on their shoulders, which lead to stress and psychological issues. For instance, one of the research found that 10% of employees have an issue with insomnia. Thus, not all workers achieve satisfaction at work in this real world. To recapitulate, this essay discussed some factors which consist of job satisfaction and provide some worker's views for job satisfaction.
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work
has become the most
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important
part of our human life. Although proffering their qualitative adult life at
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work
, it is
also
necessary to
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get
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job
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satisfaction
from one person. This essay will intend to
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analyse
that what are the
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factors
accounted for
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job
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satisfaction
and
also
discuss
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some
real-world perspective of
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job
satisfaction.

There are several reasons include which impart
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job
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satisfaction
. The predominant
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factor
is that one
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job
should consist of a higher income. It is prevalent for those
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people
who
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work
for money.

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So
, they can
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live
a
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good
lifestyle and fulfil their desires. As the basic needs of the family are increasing day by day, a higher income is significant.
For example
, one survey conducted by Forbes magazines claims that
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only
2% of the world's population have satisfied with their
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job
. Another upholding
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factor
is that a
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company
should provide a
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positive
working environment.
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Because
employees can feel better and
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work
smoothly
without any
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stress
.
Moreover
,
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job
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satisfaction
also
includes monetary incentives and frequent
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work
holidays.
Therefore
, these
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factors
are essential for
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job
satisfaction.

However
, all workers cannot attain
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job
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satisfaction
duly
in this real world.
Firstly
, there are complaints, which
is done
by
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some
employees. They say that most
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companies
provide much
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work
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because
they want to stay in the competition.
As a result
, these workers
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have to
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work
for more than stipulated hours.
Moreover
, such organizations give a short amount of time to complete a task. To this, they feel a burden on their shoulders, which lead to
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stress
and psychological issues.
For instance
, one of the research found that 10% of employees have an issue with insomnia.
Thus
, not all workers achieve
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satisfaction
at
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work
in this real world.

To recapitulate, this essay discussed
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some
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factors
which consist of
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job
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satisfaction
and provide
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some
worker's views for
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job
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satisfaction
.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
32Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers? v. 5

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
311 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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