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As more people are now studying online, in the future teachers will not be necessary. Do you agree or disagree?

As more people are now studying online, in the future teachers will not be necessary. Ll2VG
Covid has radically change our way of study. Usually, when we have to learn something, we must go to school. In this pandemic era, we are forced to study in distance learning. Many people scepticall about this change. But, it turns out student can keep learning as well as they do in the classroom. Virtual learning, in severall studies, said that it can impact the role of teachers in the near future. The arguments are there are a lot of demands for education video site, where you can learned various things. At those site, you can learn various topic that you get from the school. From math, science, sport, and others. You can set your own pace of study, since you can play back video that you don't understand. As more people are now studying online, in the future teachers will not be necessary. Do you agree or disagree?
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
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demands for education video site, where you can
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various things. At those site, you can learn various topic that you
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get
from the school. From math, science, sport,
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and others
. You can set your
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own
pace of
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study
, since you can play back video that you don't understand.

As more
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studying online, in the future teachers will not be necessary. Do you
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IELTS essay As more people are now studying online, in the future teachers will not be necessary.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
149 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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