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This days there is high risk of covid-19 worldwide. what is your opinion regarding that?

This days there is high risk of covid-19 worldwide. what is your opinion regarding that? yNyAJ
A virus emerged out from a science lab of Wuhan city in China, it is a rapidly growing virus spreading all over the world. it affects the respitoary system of the human-being. Presntly, it's being spreading globaly, and affecting million's of people. in this essay i will express my opnions regarding the wide-spread of the deadliy virus. My first opinion regarding the current situation is, wear mask and keep 2 meter distance. Looking at the present situation, this virus spread from human to human through nose, mouth and eyes mainly. For instance, if a person is affeted with virus can easily spread virus through talking with non affected person, yes but if both are wearing mask and having 2 meter distance, might reduce the risk of spreading virus. my second and most valuable oppinion is wash hands atleast for 20 seconds, stop smoking keep respitoary system healthy and increase immune-system. Humans having good respitoary system and healthy immune system helps alot to kill this virus if it affects them. For example, a person travelling in a public transport might touch to those place where effected people have touched before, this make a source of spreading virus, which can be reduced by washing hands for atleast 20 seconds with soap and water or wearing gloves. At last I would like to conclude, keep distance, wear mask, wash hands and quarintine if you feel ill. This are the only ways we can keep safe from covid.
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growing
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all over the world.
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affects the
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respitoary
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of the human-being.
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, it's being
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spreading
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globaly
, and affecting million's of
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people
.
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in
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i
will express my
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opnions
regarding the wide-spread of the
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deadliy
virus.

My
first
opinion regarding the
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current
situation is, wear mask and
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keep
2 meter distance. Looking at the present situation, this
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virus
spread from human to human through nose, mouth and eyes
mainly
.
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, if a person is
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affeted
with
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can
easily
spread
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virus
through talking with non
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affected
person, yes
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if both are wearing mask and having 2 meter distance, might
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spreading
virus.

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my
second and most valuable
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oppinion
is wash hands
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atleast
for 20 seconds,
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stop
smoking
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keep
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respitoary
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system
healthy and increase immune-system. Humans having
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good
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respitoary
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system
and healthy immune
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system
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helps
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alot
to kill this
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virus
if it affects them.
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people
have touched
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before
, this
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a source of
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spreading
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virus
, which can be
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reduced
by washing hands for
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atleast
20 seconds with soap and water or wearing gloves.

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would like
to conclude
,
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keep
distance, wear mask, wash hands and
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quarintine
if you feel ill.
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safe from
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covid
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IELTS essay This days there is high risk of covid-19 worldwide. what is your opinion regarding that?

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