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As a child, you might remember hearing “lights out” as a way to tell you it was time to go to bed.

As a child, you might remember hearing “lights out” as a way to tell you it was time to go to bed. bp3P
As a child, you might remember hearing “lights out” as a way to tell you it was time to go to bed. Having the lights off at bedtime is much more than a common bedtime phrase, though. In fact, the decision to turn out the lights — or leave them on — could affect your health. Yet the problem lies beyond ceiling lights and lamps. Light surrounds us from multiple sources, including streetlamps, televisions, and the blue light emitted from our electronic devices, like cellphones, computers, and tablets. Sleeping with any lights on is considered detrimental to getting a good night’s rest. Subsequently, not getting enough quality sleep can lead to numerous health consequences. If you’re considering leaving a light on at bedtime, consider the following repercussions.
As a child, you might remember hearing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
“lights
out” as a way to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
you it was time to go to bed. Having the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lights
off at bedtime is much more than a common bedtime phrase, though. In fact, the decision to turn out the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lights
— or
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
them on — could affect your health.

Yet
the problem lies beyond ceiling
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lights
and lamps.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Light
surrounds us from multiple sources, including streetlamps, televisions, and the blue
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
light
emitted from our electronic devices, like cellphones, computers, and tablets.

Sleeping with any
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lights
on
is considered
detrimental to getting a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
night’s rest.
Subsequently
, not getting
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
quality sleep can lead to numerous health consequences. If you’re considering leaving a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
light
on at bedtime, consider the following repercussions.
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IELTS essay As a child, you might remember hearing “lights out” as a way to tell you it was time to go to bed.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
127 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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