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Artist need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some People think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas.

Artist need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some People think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas. NQG0
Artists are known to show their creativity by the means of paintings and sculptures. Artist need freedom to develop creativity. Some individuals think artist should have freedom to express their feelings and thoughts. I partially agree that artist should be given freedom but also have some restrictions on them. It is beleived that artist are known for their unique ideas and their creations. Some artist do know their limits and they try to make things from it. When an artist creates a painting there is a meaning behind it. Not everyone get to know the meaning just by looking in that picture there is an imagination process. Some paintings have good meaning and that resembles of some unique quality. Even sculptures are made like that for example, the three monkeys that each has meaning behind it. One is telling do not see the wrong things and is placed as holding the eyes, second monkey resembles of do not speak bad and the third one closes the ear for not listenig bad things. On the other hand, artist do have a negative impact on everyone's life. There are some artist who make violating paintings which shows signs of violence and that makes the individual to think that everything is correct in this world. Some people gets influenced by the paintings and sculptures. To conclude with artist are known for their unique ideas and creative thinking whereas they should also know their limits as everything in this world is not correct and not good for everyone.
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paintings
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need freedom to develop creativity.
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Some
individuals
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think
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artist
should have freedom to express their feelings and thoughts. I
partially
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freedom
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also
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restrictions on them.

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that
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artist
are known
for their unique
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ideas
and their creations.
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Some
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artist
do know their
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limits and
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make
things from it.
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When
an
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artist
creates a
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painting
there is a
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meaning
behind it. Not everyone
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get
to know the
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meaning
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just
by looking in that picture there is an imagination process.
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Some
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paintings
have
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good
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meaning
and that resembles of
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some
unique quality. Even sculptures
are made
like that
for example
, the three monkeys that each has
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meaning
behind it. One is telling do not
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see
the
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wrong
things and
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as holding the eyes, second monkey resembles of do not speak
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bad
and the third one closes the ear for not
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listenig
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bad
things.

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,
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artist
do have a
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negative
impact on everyone's life. There are
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some
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artist
who
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make
violating
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paintings
which
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shows
signs of violence and that
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makes
the individual to
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think
that everything is correct in this world.
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people
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gets
influenced by the
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paintings
and sculptures.

To conclude
with
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artist
are known
for their unique
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ideas
and creative thinking whereas they should
also
know their limits as everything in this world is not correct and not
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good
for everyone.
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IELTS essay Artist need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some People think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas.

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4 paragraphs
254 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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