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Artificial Intelligence taking most of the jobs

In this new era of artificial intelligence, most of the jobs are done without human intervention or more precisely with low human intervention. To cope up with the changes around the world people can't take the shelter of traditional methods which takes a lot of time and especially human effort. In my opinion, how much ever, technology may go basic human work cannot be done by any supernatural creation. in this essay, I would like to explain more about the topic under discussion. Robots can listen to the commands given by people they can't decide what is right and what is wrong. they can only perform monotonous and repetitive tasks. Moreover, if we consider That jobs are taken away by robots that can happen only in fields which use excessive technology conversely it can never happen in fields like human psychology and some jobs require a lot of brainstorming which can never be done by robots. To conclude, there is no doubt that growth is essential, but growth added with ethics will have a great impact on future generations on values. For example, if an accident occurred we can only take the wrong route to save the life of the person. saving a person is more important than going on the wrong route. This kind of thinking is a good gift given to humans. But for robots taking the correct route is most essential as it is fed command.
In this new era of artificial intelligence, most of the jobs
are done
without
human
intervention or more
precisely
with low
human
intervention. To cope up with the
changes
around the world
people
can't take the shelter of traditional methods which takes
a lot of
time and
especially
human
effort.

In my opinion, how much ever, technology may go basic
human
work cannot
be done
by any supernatural creation.
in
this essay, I would like to
explain
more about the topic under discussion.

Robots can listen to the commands
given
by
people
they can't decide what is right and what is
wrong
.
they
can
only
perform monotonous and repetitive tasks.

Moreover
, if we consider That jobs
are taken
away by robots that can happen
only
in fields which
use
excessive technology
conversely
it can never happen in fields like
human
psychology and
some
jobs require
a lot of
brainstorming which can never
be done
by robots.

To conclude
, there is no doubt that growth is essential,
but
growth
added
with ethics will have a great impact on future generations on values.
For example
, if an accident occurred we can
only
take the
wrong
route to save the life of the person.
saving
a person is more
important
than going on the
wrong
route. This kind of thinking is a
good
gift
given
to
humans
.
But
for robots taking the correct route is most essential as it
is fed
command.
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IELTS essay Artificial Intelligence taking most of the jobs

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