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People believe that big companies should be responsible for their actions that might cause environmental issues.

People believe that big companies should be responsible for their actions that might cause environmental issues. Jlq8w
People believe that big companies should be responsible for their actions that might cause environmental issues. In addition, their purpose should be participating in solving this kind of problems instead of making a profit only. I am considered that companies suppose to solve the issues that they have caused due to its importance and responsibility. Firstly, there are too much problems connected with environment and if the cause will not try to contribute to solve it, the situation might exacerbate. For example, one factory is producing cell phones the emission of gases into the atmosphere which concequences are difficult to solve. This is why after making a step, all the footprints should be cleaned out. Secondly, there is no one that can clean up after every harmful action people should start worrying about operations lead to. Also, money will not be able to solve every problem on the Earth. For instance, every company should take an action to make their area cleaner and safer. To sum up, even if, companies are get stuck on making a profit, but their should care about their action and concequances.
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the issues that they have caused due to its importance and responsibility.

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, there are too
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problems connected with environment and if the cause will not try to contribute to
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solve
it, the situation might exacerbate.
For example
, one factory is producing cell phones the emission of gases into the atmosphere which
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concequences
are difficult to
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solve
. This is why after making a step, all the footprints should
be cleaned
out.

Secondly
, there is no one that can clean up after every harmful
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action
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people
should
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start
worrying about operations lead to.
Also
, money will not be able to
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solve
every problem on the Earth.
For instance
, every
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company
should take an
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action
to
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make
their area cleaner and safer.

To sum up, even if,
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are
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get
stuck on making a profit,
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but
their should care about their
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action
and
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concequances
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IELTS essay People believe that big companies should be responsible for their actions that might cause environmental issues.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
186 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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