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art should be replaced by other subject

art should be replaced by other subject Kno50

Well, art is itself a great definition which define skills that a person have. Nowadays art has became an integral part of expressing its culture, tradition as well as society which is a positive sign of increasing interest in today youths. Moreover, I think neither art nor the other subject be replaced with each other, all subject should be given equal priority. Further essay will dicuss the main ideas of encouraging art likewise other subjects. Firstly, I am going to discuss about the main points which clearifies that art should be teached in class due to which some students who are

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