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a successful person in your life

a successful person in your life 7JA9y
My uncle is a successful person, he is a professor at a medical university. he spent three years studying for his exam (konkor). Certainly, he tried hard to achieve his goals and now he can see the result of his effort. He ignored all the people who said that you cannot be successful and just concentrate on his target. Now he has two children and he guides them to follow his way. obviously, he considered their desire and what they want to be in the future.
My uncle is a successful person, he is a professor at a medical university.
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he
spent three years studying for his exam (
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konkor
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to achieve his goals and
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now
he can
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see
the result of his effort. He
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ignored
all the
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people
who said that you cannot be successful and
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just
concentrate on his target.
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Now
he has two
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children and
he guides them to follow his way.
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obviously
, he considered their desire and what they want to be in the future.

IELTS essay a successful person in your life

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
86 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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