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a successful person in your life

a successful person in your life 7JA9y

My uncle is a successful person, he is a professor at a medical university. he spent three years studying for his exam (konkor). Certainly, he tried hard to achieve his goals and now he can see the result of his effort. He ignored all the people who said that you cannot be successful and just concentrate on his target. Now he has two children and he guides them to follow his way. obviously, he considered their desire and what they want to be in the future.

My uncle is a successful person, he is a professor at a medical university. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterHe
he
 spent three years studying for his exam (Possible spelling mistake found.honorConnordonorKongocondorkronor
konkor
). Certainly
, he tried This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 to achieve his goals and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 he can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 the result of his effort. He This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :neglected
ignored
 all the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who said that you cannot be successful and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 concentrate on his target. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
 he has two Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).children, and
children and
 he guides them to follow his way. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterObviously
obviously
, he considered their desire and what they want to be in the future. 