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arranged marriage or love marriage

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Marriage is an important social institution. The question is that whether arranged or love marriage is better. Personally, I find the latter way of thinking more convincing. First and foremost, security and stability seem to be the most valued things looked for in arranged marriage, while looking for a partner for their son or daughter, parents will first check whether they share the same background, socio-economic status, level of education, or not. Another concern to consider is the fact that sometimes the daughters or the sons feel a strong sense of obligation and duty to their parents. They are compelled to accept their parents’ choice of their spouses, to do otherwise is perceived to be disrespectful and a betrayal to the whole family. Love marriage seems impeccable on the surface. F. Scott Peck once said: ‘Love is not effortless. It is effortful’; therefore, love marriage requires such achievement to sustain a happy life. In the first place, the romantic feelings in the first few months will only stay for a short period. When the honeymoon stage is over and the mundane realities have set in, people begin to feel dissatisfied, wondering if their partner still loves them. More importantly, people have no clue to blame for anyone if their marriage does not work out perfectly, which means they have no choice but to take full responsibility for their decision. In contrast, one might enter an arranged marriage with much lower expectations and everything work out immediately. In summary, both arranged and love marriages have their own strengths and faults. From my viewpoint, there is no perfect formula to make a marriage work, it's up to each person’s wish and opinion.
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Marriage
is an
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important
social institution. The question is that whether
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arranged
or
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love
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marriage
is better.
Personally
, I find the latter way of thinking more convincing.

First
and foremost, security and stability seem to be the most valued things looked for in
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arranged
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marriage
, while looking for a partner for their son or daughter, parents will
first
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check
whether they share the same background,
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socio-economic
status, level of education, or not. Another concern to consider is the fact that
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sometimes
the daughters or the sons feel a strong sense of obligation and duty to their parents. They
are compelled
to accept their parents’ choice of their spouses, to do
otherwise
is perceived
to be disrespectful and a betrayal to the whole family.

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Love
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marriage
seems impeccable on the surface. F. Scott Peck once said: ‘
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Love
is not effortless. It is effortful’;
therefore
,
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love
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marriage
requires such achievement to sustain a happy life.

In the
first
place, the romantic feelings in the
first
few months will
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only
stay for a short period. When the honeymoon stage is over and the mundane realities have set in,
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people
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begin
to feel dissatisfied, wondering if their partner
still
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loves
them. More
importantly
,
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people
have no clue to blame for anyone if their
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marriage
does not work out
perfectly
, which means they have no choice
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but
to take full responsibility for their decision.
In contrast
, one might enter an
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arranged
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marriage
with much lower expectations and everything work out immediately.

In summary, both
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arranged
and
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love
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marriages
have their
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own
strengths and faults. From my viewpoint, there is no perfect formula to
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make
a
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marriage
work, it's up to each person’s wish and opinion.
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IELTS essay arranged marriage or love marriage

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
280 words
6.0
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